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Passion trapped in Paradise (WIP)

Summary:

“But…my people…”

Hollyberry cookie is getting guilt tripped by Eternal Sugar Cookie to stay with her forever with Eternal Sugar Cookie going as far into emotionally manipulating her.

Notes:

WARNING: this contains EternalBerry(?) angst! Even though I wouldn’t consider this EternalBerry since I don’t ship it I would still advise you to scroll if you heavily dislike the ship!

Other notes: this was actually my first fanfic the text js started tweaking so I gave up ;-; but when I found it as a draft in the edit thing I decided to pick up again and continue it, gimme yummy feedback js like I said in my other one :3

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HollyBerry cookie received a letter from Pure Vanilla Cookie about the beasts and went on a mission to find Eternal Sugar Cookie and defeat her…but…she seems…oddly nice, how sus…

 

fast forward to Eternal Sugar Cookie manipulating HollyBerry Cookie into staying with her forever “joy without measure”

 

ETERNAL SUGAR POV

 

“Dear…why won’t you come hold my hand…? Ease all your burdens, you will feel happier this way…”

“…please?”

 

her movements…they were slow, kinda like she was forcing herself to move because the sloth was pushing her back

HollyBerry Cookie could only try to not get manipulated, trying to explain she has a kingdom to protect, knowing it was no avail

 

“But…my people…!”

 

Hollyberry tried explaining, knowing its useless

That just made Eternal Sugar Cookie more eager to make her join her eternal “paradise”

“…”

 

Eternal Sugar just sighed, still trying to convince her

 

“Why won’t you come with me? Look at all these burdens on your shoulders…let me ease them.”

 

she said with a sympathetic tone, trying so hard to get her other half to join her so-called “paradise”

 

HollyBerry Cookie sighed, attempting to explain once more, knowing it’s useless

 

”Listen…I…really enjoyed your paradise ‘n stuff but…I can’t stay…I really can’t, I have duties to do.”

 

she said with an honest tone, hoping she would understand from that pathetic attempt of an apology/explanation

Eternal Sugar Cookie grew impatient by the second

 

“Why won’t you understand…?!?! This is MY paradise…I built it so people don’t have to SUFFER the same fate as me…! Come on now…hold my hand and join this paradise I made…”

Raspberry Cookie and WildBerry Cookie just watched it all unfold, unsure how it will end

“…how long will this go on for…?” WildBerry asked

“Well…a QUEEN must never fight! Otherwise the fight will go on for forever! So…I think…forever…” Raspberry Cookie replied

“…oh.”

HOLLYBERRY COOKIE POV

 

No matter how many times she tried, Eternal Sugar Cookie never gave up, but…she’s the ancient of passion, she can’t give up…no…she can’t…

 

”But-“

Eternal Sugar Cookie interrupted her with a sigh

“…listen…”

“I created this paradise so the happy don’t end up like me…Pavlova Cookie told me your heart is empty, so come on…join me in this paradise and you will feel REAL happiness.”

HollyBerry could do nothing but sigh

“No…IM NOT JOINING YOU…!”

Eternal Sugar Cookie just stared at her, offended.

 

ETERNAL SUGAR POV

”…”

“But…don’t leave…”

She pleaded with pity

alr guys imma end it here and again, gimme yummy feedback on how i can improve this (in my opinion, i think this is better since my other one was PURE LAZY) -shrimp