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Hey everyone, I'm the idiot mirroring this. Why? I like the story, and Soul themselfs have stated that you can mirror onto this site if you attribute it back to where it was originally posted. Fair warning that I am a complete noob at writing and only did this because I was bored.
First things first, please read the original THP.moe thread. It's really good (despite the rough start) and I took some (a lot) of editorial liberties since just copying it 1:1 sounded incredibly boring (also the discussion around the story can be equally as entertaining as the story itself).
Another major reason for the rewriting is because you could tell Soul had not fully solidified their idea on how to do the story (They literally admits to not knowing how to write Sumi pre-Alice and that Gregor was made but his character wasn't very concrete).
I am in no way affiliated with Lost Soul, and do not claim this fanwork as my own. All credits go to them.
This story will only go up to the end of Part 1 (for now) as I feel most of the other parts are already good and a lot of it is going to be copy and pasted directly from the source (except for ahem ahem 3A ahem ahem). (oh also 2C but if I were to do all parts, I would do them in release order, not chronological.)
Please pleas PLEASE point out any errors. I am not confident in my own ability to rewrite and would like constructive feedback if the story stops making sense without knowledge of the original thread.
Do not expect me to update this often. I am working solely on the spare time I have.
(Also probably should have named it "An unofficial USiL rewrite" since the creator of R/R and that one dude who keeps making fanart of it are mirroring it 1:1) I now have due to said R/R creator's request
Well that seemed like enough (unless I feel like adding more). Clarification time over.