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The Dragon and the Knight of Rose

Summary:

An illustrated poem recounting two duels between Treize Khushrenada and Chang Wufei in the style of the 14th century poem, "Sir Gawain and the Green Knight.

It was the dawning of the year when five stars shot from the sky

Notes:

--For an example of how to read the meter of this poem, I recommend you head over to Peter Pringle's amazing ballad version of this poem set to music!

--And here for the Pearl Poet's original text of Sir Gawain and the Green Knight in Middle English plus translation.

(See the end of the work for more notes.)

Work Text:

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It was the dawning of the year
When five stars shot from the sky–
On shining wings of Vulcan, brazen tyrants to defy.
No weapon wrought of Earth could fell
Those five valiant men-at-arms;
No villain’s fury lay them low
Nor violence bring them harm.
But a lion can a fox become
When his need is for deceit–
T’was not by might, but cunning,
Brought our heroes’ first defeat.

Their enemy: an honest fiend,
High of head and chivalry,
A hawk of war that bit the hand he’d served so faithfully;
Without his hound, or lady fair, the chevalier arrived,
Hailed loud by shameless hunting horn,
He faced the host
Of five.

No plate nor harness had he worn,
On a horse of white did ride,
And though his sword was honed and sharp it hung harmless at his side.
His coat was soft, and azure blue,
And azure was the field
Against which blazed a lion Or
Upon his banner’s shield.
He offered no resistance to the company of foes,
And in his naked hand he bore
A single bloom
Of rose.

“Good gentlemen, my noble friends,
Brave warriors from the stars;
Never has the Earth beheld such grand and fearsome arms.
But though steel and arrows pierce you not,
You are but children that I see–
And none among you strong enough
To tilt a lance with me.
Therefore I come before you, unarmored in repose,
To propose a simple game:
A duel of traded blows.

Should you agree to fight me
Man to shieldless man,
You may strike before me and I’ll take the blow you land.
And should I flinch, or shy away,
Or if my knees should bend,
Then death will find me here and now,
And just will be
My end.”

The Fifth was first upon the scene:
As from a dragon long ago
His flame-lit spear, as well as sword
He bore; a matchless foe.
“I’ll take your wager and your game”
Proudly said the page,
“But before you perish at my hand,
I’d have you know
My name.”

They traded titles and salutes,
Then the Fifth of Five took aim,
Fearless, though his striking true would mean he’d take the same.
He knew nothing of this haughty man,
Save that he’d proven sly;
Thought he: “I’ll gamble that this knight
Will cower first, and die.”
His trident flashed– like vipers’ fangs;
That force to none would yield;
It might have felled a dozen knights, and broken any shield.
From those tips of deadly steel
The king of beasts would flinch–
They drove longside the Rose Knight’s face,
Who did not move
An inch.

Then quick as as silver, sharp as shame,
The second’s sword slid past his skin;
And twixt the two a skein of silk
Could not have passed therein.
The Fifth of Five had grasped his hilt
But no chance to pull it free–
As fast as it began the duel
Was lost, and so
Was he.

And now, though neither blood had spilt,
He knelt at his rival’s feet;
The Rose Knight lowered down his sword
And smiled, half discreet.
“Well fought,” said he, as though that night
He’d never once risked harm,
And to the vanquished boy he’d fought he offered up his arm;
“Nought but gracious thanks have I
For one so fierce in pride–
To come with might far greater
Yet for honor, leave it aside.

So, good friend, moan not your loss;
For the hour and field will be
Both likewise in your favor when we meet again,” quoth he.
“Twelvemonth from now, on Christmas Eve,
I wot our wager we’ll renew:
That whatever blow you land on me,
I shall return
To you."

Well-wroth the Fifth leapt to his feet,
Held aloft unbloodied brand,
Vowing: “however long the row ahead I’ll harrow til you’re dead;
And whether I cut first or no, on that Christmastide–
By eve’s end we’ll see how well
The loser pays his debts
from Hell.”

“I look forward to the day” was all the knight replied,
Sheathing sword, he turned his back,
And away to doom
Did ride.

–That bloody eve of Christmas,
Just as the knight foretold,
They met upon a field of stars
Whereon the future would unfold.
The Knight of Roses charged alone,
And with his sword, swung wide–
The promised wound he fell upon drove deep into his side.

Behind him shone the Earth in blue,
As blue as his maille and coat;
The Knight of Roses died in arms,
A word of praise within his throat.

The Fifth of Five cried out in pain,
Bright tears in his star-stung eyes;
Too late he felt his own heart break
On that wartorn
Wintertide.

Notes:

Because I am a madman, I have rendered into verse the duel(s) between Wufei and Treize, with a medieval twist. Tallgeese II has likewise been transformed into a destrier of draft-horse size, complete with Gundam Barding.

While the poem was done last year by Christmas, the illustration took me, appropriately, one year and a day to finish. I promised myself I would get it done by New Year's, and here at 8pm on December 31st, I have kept that promise by the skin of my teeth.
My rendition was inspired by the original 14th century poem, "Sir Gawain and the Green Knight", but it owes its modernized ballad format solely to Peter Pringle's incredible musical rendition of the Green Knight, which is much more familiar for those of us who are unaccustomed to Middle English alliterative bob-and-wheel verse.

This project came about because it struck me suddenly (around Christmas) that Treize and Wufei's fight have some coincidental parallels to the Green Knight:

For the first duel, one party is giving challenge and offers no resistance (i.e. Treize letting a kid throw a punch at him with a giant robot and getting his hair blown back). One party is wearing armor but the one offering challenge isn't. As with Gawain, honor is what saves the young combatant from being killed/beheaded. The duel ends in a prediction that they will fight again, with their roles reversed ("Next time we fight it will be with his specialty, mobile suits"). Then in a year's time on Christmas (the end of the Eve Wars) they have a parallel exchange, where one is killed in body and the other... kind of in spirit? Even though Treize loses the duel, Wufei is the one shattered by it.
Gawain having a five pointed star on his shield and Wufei being the pilot of 05 was a cool coincidence as well.
(...Now, do I have an idea for how the other part of the poem goes, where Wufei has to seek out the Rose Knight in a far-off castle, only to meet a mysterious Duke and two(?) even more mysterious ladies, and strike a bargain where they ritually exchange everything one receives during the day and the other at night? Yes. God help me, I do.)

Some other influences included in the poem are Twa Corbies ("his hawk and his hound and his lady faire"-- which in this case I'm interpreting as Zechs and Lady Une), and a touch of The Highway Man ("Blood red were his spurs in the golden noon; wine-red was his velvet coat"), which I confess has always reminded me of Treize.

 **I have changed the first line of the final verse to be "the bloody eve of Christmas" instead of New Year's, because damnit that's what it ought to have been in the first place, and I don't know WHY I wrote it as New Year's.

Technical Notes:
• "The fifth of five" is doubly relevant, as Gawain is known for having a pentacle, or five pointed star, on his shield, and Wufei of course is 05.
"A lion Or" on a field of azure is heraldic terminology, indicating a golden lion on a blue background. (aka. The OZ logo.)
•Wufei's sword has what I hope are the correct characters for "Shenlong", or "rising dragon".
•The "shameless hunting horn" here is in place of the foghorn that blows when the OZ command ship circles around to challenge 05 to a duel.
• One of my favorite parts of the Pearl poet's Green Knight is all the trashtalk. "I didn't come to Camelot to fight, because no one here is on my level. You are like little babies to me." History will perhaps not remember Treize for occasionally being a little shit, but WOW he sure could be.
•Tallgeese is known for two things: being ludicrously fast and ludicrously huge. Unfortunately, horses are sort of constrained to being one or the other, so I picked Hugeness over speed to represent its main features.