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The Broken Spear

Summary:

The Chasm Kata.

Need I say more?

Notes:

Kaladin is such an interesting character who has so many epic, life-changing moments. I could write poetry about him forever.

But it's the Chasm Kata that really stuck with me and got me to actually sit down and write something.

Hope you enjoy.

(See the end of the work for more notes.)

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Deep slashes in the splintered rock

A scar upon the face

Of a shattered land, a broken man,

A wound that won’t erase.

 

Dark looming walls and dripping plants

Dead soldiers and white bones.

Thick air and darkness lit by spheres

Placed on the littered stone.

 

Here life and death live side by side

Lifespren and rotspren play.

Can life and death live side by side?

We do it every day.

 

The chasm walls wind on for miles

A catacombs of pain

For those who the cruel world forgot

A no-man’s land of shame.

 

A broken spear lies in a puddle,

Spearhead—the blade—snapped off.

They thought that they could break me down,

Disarmed, alone, cast off.

 

They tried to crush me between rock

Get me to leap the ledge.

Turns out that whetting blade on stone

Just gives a sharper edge.

 

So sharp, sometimes, I cut myself-

Oh yes, they broke me good.

But slivers of a broken spear

—though all that’s left is wood—

 

When lifted up by one who won’t

Stop trying or back down

Can light a fire in eyes of others

A blaze no storm can drown.

 

Callused fingers, well-worn wood.

And most of them, they mock.

A moment poised, a night in rain

Jibes echo off the rock.

 

Can’t see them for my eyes are closed

Don’t hear them as they jeer.

A dead man’s scolds, a dead boy’s laugh—

That’s all that I can hear.

 

The phantom whispering of wind

As it calls me to fight.

To look up to the sky again,

To stand for what is right.

 

Reminds me of the man I was.

Can’t be that man again.

But maybe, I could learn from him,

So I could safeguard them?

 

Words stab, wind calls, heart aches, I stand

The eye of my own storm.

With pressures crowding every side,

It’s then that men transform.

 

I choose to try. To join the wind,

To fight once more and strive.

To give them everything I have

And keep them all alive.

Notes:

I also put it in the tags, but if any of you have any constructive criticism for me, shoot. I love writing prose, but poetry is where my real passion lies, and I want to get as good at it as I can.

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Thank you all for doing so, I really appreciate it.

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