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# THE LAST NOTE OF THE SONG
*Being a true account, as best as such things can be accounted, of Maglor Fëanorion, called Makalaurë the Harper, in the long years of his wandering and his return at last to the Undying Lands*
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There is a thing that most people — Elves and Men alike, and Hobbits too, if you are curious, though Hobbits are a sensible folk who seldom trouble themselves with such philosophical tangles — most people, it is said, get rather wrong about madness. They speak of it as though it arrives the way a thunderstorm does: suddenly, with little warning, and all at once. There is a crack, they say, something in the mind that simply breaks, and the person who was there a moment before is simply gone.
They are mistaken.
Madness, the true kind that swallows a soul whole and is not done with it for ages, does not come that way at all. It creeps. It begins, if truth be told, as a shadow one cannot quite name — a thought that circles back rather than passes on, a grief that does not ease with morning — and it grows so gradually, so tenderly patient in its work, that the one it stalks does not see it for what it is until the web is already drawn around them. By then the spider has been weaving for years.
This was the manner of Maglor's undoing. And it began, as many undoings do, not with him at all.
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## I. Of Finwë the King, and His Peculiar End
You know something of Finwë, perhaps — or if you do not, know this: he was the first King of the Noldor, the High Elves, those bright and restless craftsmen who loved things made and making equally, who followed the Valar to Valinor in the long ago and built Tirion upon Túna in the light of the Two Trees. He was a good king. History, which is unkind to many, is on this point at least generous: Finwë was noble and beloved, and those who loved him were not wrong to do so.
He had, however, what we might charitably call a complicated family.
His first wife, Míriel Þerindë — the finest needlewoman the world has ever seen, and the world has seen a great many needlewomen — gave all of her great spirit into the bearing of their one child, and thereafter wished only to rest. She went to Lórien to sleep, and did not wake, and the Elves of Valinor, who had not yet known what it was to lose one of their own, were troubled beyond their ability to account for it. Finwë, bereaved and lonely, eventually remarried, taking Indis of the Vanyar to wife — a thing never before done, for Elves do not take second spouses — and was, if not the same man he had been, at least warm again, and had more children besides.
This happiness cost him a great deal.
It cost him his firstborn son's love, for Fëanor — brilliant, burning Fëanor, the mightiest of all the Noldor, whose hands could make anything the mind could conceive — never forgave his father the remarriage, never forgave his half-brothers their mere existence, and never forgave the world for taking his mother, which was not strictly the world's fault, but grief does not traffic much in fairness. When Fëanor was exiled from Tirion for drawing sword upon his half-brother Fingolfin in the very courts of Manwë, Finwë went with him into exile at Formenos. He would not abandon his son, even when his son could not love him cleanly.
And there, at the gates of Formenos, Melkor the Black came in the night and killed him.
The Elves are not easily parted from life, and their spirits, when the body fails, go to the Halls of Mandos to wait their release and return. But Finwë's case was, as it had always been, peculiar. There was the matter of Míriel, whose spirit had been held in Mandos all this while, unable to be rehoused so long as her husband lived. There was the matter of the Statute the Valar had set down regarding his remarriage, which had involved certain arrangements of consequence. And there was the simple fact that Finwë was the first to be slain in Aman, and Námo the Doomsman does not treat new precedents carelessly.
What is certain is this: Finwë went to the Halls of Mandos, and Mandos held him, and Mandos holds him still. He will not walk again in the green fields under the sun until the ending of the world or something very much like it — a permanent resident of the grey halls, the most faithful of kings, waiting with the patience that grief either destroys or perfects, for something unnamed that has not yet arrived.
Míriel, at last freed, was reborn and returned to her loom. She weaves there still, and the things she makes are said to be very beautiful, and very sorrowful.
And Finwë's eldest son, whose love for his father was the one love unclouded by pride, went screaming across the world to make war upon Morgoth in Beleriand, and took six of his seven sons with him, and swore a terrible oath, and kindled a fire that would not be quenched until nearly everything Fëanor had ever loved was ash.
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## II. The Fire and What It Cost
Let us talk now of the burning of the ships.
The burning of the ships of the Teleri at Alqualondë, and afterward at Losgar, is the kind of act that people argue about in the halls of history long after all the principals are gone — and in this particular case, some of them are not exactly gone, so the arguments have retained a personal quality. But this account concerns itself with one man's experience of it, and not the arguments.
Maglor, who was called Kanafinwë in his mother-name — the Voice of Finwë, which tells you something of the pride his father took in him — was the second son, the singer, the one who could make stone weep and stars pause in their courses to listen. He had a sword, as all his brothers did, and he knew how to use it. But the sword was never what he was for. He was for music: for the long and patient work of gathering grief into meaning, of making something endurable out of what had been merely experienced.
He sang at the Kinslaying at Alqualondë. He sang, and his sword moved, and Teleri died, and the blood of Elves — the first blood of Elves to be spilled by Elves — ran dark in the harbor of the swans. He did not afterward find a song adequate to account for what he had done. He looked, and kept looking, but there was not one.
And then came Losgar, and the ships.
Fëanor had made his decision. That much Maglor had understood — had not agreed, had said so once, and been overruled by the force of his father's conviction, which was less an argument than a weather system. The ships were to be burned, and the Noldor of Fingolfin's host left stranded on the shores of Middle-earth, because Fëanor trusted no one with ships enough to send them back, and because Fëanor, in the hours of his greatest resolve, had never been especially burdened by sympathy.
The fire was lit. The first hull caught.
And then word reached them — stumbling, breathless, the bearer of it pale with something that was not yet fully understood — that Telufinwë was unaccounted for. Amras. The younger of the twins, who should have been on the shore with his brother Amrod but was not, because Amras had always slept with the deep carelessness of someone utterly certain the world would wait, and had a gift for being precisely where no one expected him, especially at inconvenient moments.
There was nothing to be done. The fire had already eaten the wood too deeply. Fëanor knew it. Maedhros knew it. Maglor, standing at a distance near the treeline, knew it, and felt the knowing as a splinter of ice beneath his sternum, sharp and very small and impossibly cold.
He could not see his father's face clearly from where he stood. He thought, perhaps, that was fortunate.
Six sons, now, where there had been seven. And Fëanor spoke of it only once, briefly, to Maedhros, in a voice Maglor did not hear, and then he gathered himself into the brilliance that was his nature and led them forward into Beleriand, because forward was the only direction left, and he kept leading until Balrogs surrounded him near Eithel Sirion and he died as he had lived: burning.
Maglor was not there when his father died. He learned of it from Maedhros, who told him in a voice that had already acquired the quality of a man holding himself together by main force and not entirely certain how long he could sustain it.
Maglor had not been there. He had not stopped it. He had not stopped the ships.
The splinter of ice did not melt. It spread.
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## III. A Catalogue of Losses
Here follows a record of what Maglor lost, and in what order, because to understand what he became one must first account carefully for what he had been, and then reckon the subtraction.
*Grandfather.* Finwë the King. Not present. Could not be. Already in Mandos before the ships had burned.
*Father.* Fëanor. The greatest of the Noldor; perhaps the greatest of the Eldar entire. Died in flame, as he had always half-threatened he would, his spirit so vast and so incandescent that his body burned away before his enemies could finish the work. The first loss that struck Maglor in full, because the grief of Finwë had still been half-numb, still wrapped in the breathless speed of exile and rebellion. Fëanor's death had its own quality: vast, and final, and it left a silence in the world that no sound quite reached.
*Amras.* Who slept on a burning ship and did not wake. Who was nineteen years younger than the silence, and is remembered in that silence, as the young and sudden dead always are.
*Maedhros.* The eldest. The one who had held them all together the way a hand holds scattered grain — imperfectly, losing bits at the edges, but keeping the center from dispersing entirely. Maedhros, who had been hung from Thangorodrim by his wrist for years and gotten rather worse than he started. Who gave up the kingship of the Noldor in reparation for the Kinslaying, a thing their father would not have done, a thing Maglor always thought cost him more than the wrist had. Who, in the end, could not outlast the Oath, and leaped with his Silmaril into a fiery chasm in the ruin of a world.
*Celegorm.* Bright, proud, dangerous, who loved hunting above all and hounds above most people, and who died at the Havens of Sirion in the Third Kinslaying, which is not a pleasant chapter in anyone's accounting of themselves.
*Caranthir.* The dark-tempered one, who swore more volubly than he planned and was fiercer than he intended. Who died on the same dark day as Celegorm.
*Curufin.* Who was more like their father than any of them, in the sharpness of his face and the brilliance of his hands and the pride that lived in him like a second skeleton. Who alone among them had a son. Who died at the Havens also.
*Amrod.* The surviving twin, who walked into battle at Ossiriand and did not walk out.
And then there was Maglor: still alive. Persistently, inexplicably, inconveniently alive, as though the world were uncertain what to do with him and preferred to defer the decision.
He had always had a talent for surviving. It had never felt like a gift.
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He had the Silmaril for a while — the third one, the last one, the jewel that burned with the light of the Trees of Valinor and had cost more in blood than any light ought to cost. It burned in his hand. It burned through his hand, judging him unworthy by the only verdict that could not be argued with. And at last he threw it into the sea, because it seemed to him that he and the jewel had reached the same conclusion about each other.
And then he was simply there, on the shore of the world, with the sound of waves, an empty sky, and nowhere to go.
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## IV. On the Education of Two Small Half-Elves
Before the end — before the ruin of the Elder Days, before Beleriand sank beneath the waves — there was a period of some years that Maglor would afterward think of with a bewilderment that was not unpleasant, though he could not adequately explain it.
He and Maedhros found two children after the Third Kinslaying, in the wreckage of the Havens of Sirion. Twin boys, half-elven, small and frightened and inclined to bite if cornered, which under the circumstances was entirely understandable. Their mother had fled across the sea with the Silmaril; their father was somewhere on the horizon, sailing toward the Valar on an impossible errand. The children were, in short, alone in the ruins of something Maglor had helped ruin.
He took them. The reasons were complicated and the motivation was not pure and he has never pretended otherwise. But the thing that followed was: he taught them the names of stars, and how to string a bow, and what to do when the cold comes and the fire won't catch, and what it sounds like when the wind shifts before rain. He listened to them argue, as twins argue, which is constant and deeply felt and mostly about nothing. He watched them grow. He felt, to his considerable surprise, something that might charitably be described as ordinary happiness — a quiet, warm, modest thing, like a hearthfire on a cold night. Nothing like the vast burning of his father. But real.
Elrond, the elder by some minutes, had the quality of still water that runs inconveniently deep. Elros was quicker, fierier, more readily moved by the world and less interested in recording it. They were more unlike than twins usually are, and entirely devoted to each other, and not entirely undevoted to Maglor, though they expressed this in the manner of children who would not admit to softness if you paid them.
He raised them to fifty-five. Which is young, even by half-elven standards, but is not nothing. Fifty-five is a real thing: a person shaped, a person started.
And then the madness — which had been patient, which had been waiting since Alqualondë, since Losgar, since the long losses — finally completed its work. He did not notice it finishing. That, too, is the nature of the thing. One morning the shore was there, and the house was there, and the boys were there; and one morning only the shore remained, and he was walking it, and the house was somewhere very far behind him.
He did not say goodbye. He was not, at that moment, capable of it.
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## V. The Shore and the Years
He does not much like to speak of this part, and so we will not linger in it unduly. But it must be spoken of, or the rest will not be understood.
The sea was there. It is always there. It makes a sound that is not quite music and not quite speech and is exactly and only itself — vast, and indifferent, and persistently present. He walked beside it. He sang when the singing came to him, which was less and less often as the years went. He did not eat with any great interest. He did not sleep so much as cease to move at intervals. He thought — or he circled, rather, which is what passes for thought when the mind has come loose from its moorings — in circles within circles about things that no amount of circling could mend.
His brothers were dead. His father was dead. His grandfather was in Mandos, which is not precisely dead but is not particularly alive. And the children he had raised —
*(here the circling would tighten)*
— the children had made their choices, as all half-elven were given to do. Elrond had chosen the life of the Elves. Elros had chosen mortality.
Elros had chosen mortality.
Every time this thought completed itself, Maglor returned to the beginning of it and started again, because the ending was insupportable. Not because it was wrong — it was Elros's choice, freely made, as the Valar intended — but because of what it entailed. The fevers of Men. The slow dimming of the eye. The stiffening of the hand. The succession of small losses that attend even the most peaceful of mortal deaths, the body giving up its capacities one by one like a householder boarding up windows before a storm. And then the death itself — permanent, a departure beyond the circles of the world from which no report comes back.
And why had Elros chosen it?
Here the circling became very tight indeed.
Had he been a bad example? He was a Fëanorion — kinslayer, oath-sworn, bearer of a burning jewel that had judged him at the last and found him wanting. What kind of a model was that for a child choosing what to do with immortal life? Had Elros looked at Maglor and concluded, quite reasonably, that Elf-life looked like that — like grief and pride and war and the particular thinness of someone who has been alive longer than joy can be sustained — and chosen accordingly?
Maglor did not know. He would never know. The wound could not scar because it could not close. Was Elros in pain at the last? Did his mind keep its light? Did he remember them — did he remember Maglor — with anything other than the bitterness that abandonment deserves?
He was a coward. He knew it. He had always known it. Not the cowardice of the battlefield — no one could accuse a son of Fëanor of flinching from blades — but the other kind, the deeper kind: the cowardice of the man who, when the grief becomes large enough, simply walks away, and leaves those who love him to manage without warning or explanation.
He thought about ending it. The thought did not come all at once or with any plan — it came the way all the other thoughts came, circling, returning: *why not stop? The brothers are in Mandos. Would Maedhros be glad to see me? Would Celegorm be exasperated? Would Curufin—*
But the thought always snagged on Curufin.
Curufin, who had a son. Celebrimbor. Who had been left somewhere in the world, alive the last Maglor had known, and about whom Maglor had not tried to know any more, because not-knowing was a lighter thing to carry than the alternatives.
And then it snagged on Elrond.
To abandon Elrond twice — the second time without even the madness as excuse, simply the deliberate choice of a man who had given up — was a selfishness that cancelled all other accounting. He could not do it. He would not. He pushed the thought away with the exhausted determination of a man who has won the same small battle a thousand times and is no longer certain it counts as winning.
He went on walking.
The world continued without him, in the way that worlds do — Sauron rose, and was diminished, and rose again; kingdoms fell and kingdoms were built; the Rings were forged and unmade; the Age turned. Maglor heard of none of it. He was on the shore. He was always on the shore. One of the greatest Elves who had ever lived, sitting on a beach somewhere, walking, walking, and failing to eat anything in particular.
The sea said nothing useful. The sea is not, by nature, consoling.
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## VI. The Return and the Reckoning
He did not plan to return to Aman. That is perhaps the most Maglor thing about the whole of it. The great westward crossing, the arrival at the Undying Lands, the homecoming that ought to have involved some settled purpose — he stumbled into it. The ship he found himself on moved westward, because ships that find the straight road have no opinion about whether their passengers intend the journey, and he arrived, and Aman received him with the careful dignity it reserves for returned things that are not entirely sure they should have come back.
Elrond was there.
Elrond had been there for some years already — having sailed West after the Three Rings lost their virtue, bringing with him the particular expression of a man who has processed rather too much, thank you, and would now prefer a quieter century.
When Elrond saw Maglor, he stopped completely still in the manner of someone who has rehearsed this moment many times and finds the reality has declined to resemble any of the rehearsals.
"You came," Elrond said.
"I—" said Maglor, who had prepared a great deal and found it had all departed in the relevant moment. "Yes."
What followed was an embrace of the kind that costs both parties something, and they did not speak much more of it for quite some time, because there are things that want age before they can be voiced, like wine not yet ready, and some silences are more honest than words.
And then, in the days after — c
"You came," Elrond said.
"I—" said Maglor, who had prepared a great deal and found it had all departed in the relevant moment. "Yes."
What followed was an embrace of the kind that costs both parties something, and they did not speak much more of it for quite some time, because there are things that want age before they can be voiced, like wine not yet ready, and some silences are more honest than words.
And then, in the days after — carefully, unhurriedly, because Elrond had always been careful and unhurried with the things that mattered most — he told Maglor about Celebrimbor.
Not harshly. But truthfully, because Elrond has a gift for truth that is partly his nature and partly a discipline he has practiced for centuries. Celebrimbor, son of Curufin. Fëanorion. The one who had renounced the Oath and tried to make something beautiful with his inheritance instead of merely lethal. Who had built the Rings of Power and been deceived and captured, and who had been made, in his last hours, into a banner of terror borne before Sauron's host — his body a weapon, until it was no longer of use as one.
Maglor listened. He heard it to the end.
He said nothing for a very long time. Then he went out into the garden, very quietly, and was sick at the edge of a decorative hedge, and then sat in the dark until the stars came out, and then sat among the stars.
Curufin, he thought. In Mandos, where the dead wait. Curufin, who was so like their father — that same sharp, burning quality, that same smallness of mercy and largeness of craft, and underneath all of it some buried softness that pride rode over constantly, except in the rare moments when his son was near.
His son.
Maglor had not protected him. Had not tried. Had not known there was protecting needed, because he had been on a shore, walking circles in his own grief, while his nephew — his brother's only child, the last of the line, the one Fëanorion who had tried the hardest to be something other than what the Oath made of them —
Curufin must hate me, he thought, and did not stop thinking it for a long time. If I walked into the Halls of Mandos now and found him there, he would turn away, and he would not be wrong.
VII. The Garden of the Oaks
In Elrond's house in Aman — a gracious place of many rooms and considerable grounds, as befits a lord of his standing and his history — there was a portion of garden that no one tended much.
It lay in the permanent shadow of three great oaks: old trees, ancient even by the measure of that land, broad-shouldered and patient in their shade. Under them the ground was too dark and too root-threaded for most things to flourish. The flowerbeds that bordered the path gave up before reaching that corner, and the gardeners, who were skilled and took a professional pride in their work, directed their art toward the portions of the garden that cooperated. The oak-corner was left to moss and a few ferns of determined character and the slow, satisfied work of acorns becoming oaks.
Maglor found it in his first week in Aman, and returned to it regularly thereafter.
There was a stone bench beneath the nearest oak — placed there at some point, presumably with good intentions, now entirely reclaimed by moss. From it the house was visible through the trees: warmly lit, breathing the soft sounds of ordinary life. Far enough for quiet. Close enough not to be entirely lost. It suited him.
He was there on the morning in question, which was a morning in the rounding of a year, mild and unremarkable by all outward measure. He was on the bench, very still, his hands resting open in his lap, his eyes open and attending to nothing visible.
He was thinking about Elros.
He was, to be truthful, usually thinking about Elros, in one form or another.
It came in waves, as things do on shores — long intervals of something that was not peace but resembled it from a sufficient distance, and then the wave, and then he was entirely inside it again. Elros's mortal life: had it been painful? Had the old age come early, the body fading before the mind was prepared for it? Had his last years been dignified, or had they been a long diminishment — the eyes clouding, the hands forgetting their work, the mind's quick fire reduced to embers? Had he known enough, in his last coherent hours, to know that he was dying?
And whose fault, if it had been hard?
Here the thought closed around itself.
He had been a broken example. Whatever small gifts he had given them — the songs, the stars, the ordinary warmth of being kept — he had also given them this: a foster-father whose hands had been in the harbor at Alqualondë, who carried a burning oath he could not put down, who had walked away without a word one morning and not returned. What child, raised on that, would look upon Elvish life and want it? What child would choose to be that, forever?
I drove him from it, he thought. If Elros's mortal death was bitter, it was my bitterness that ran in the roots of it.
He had been sitting since dawn. The oak made its shade patiently over him. He did not notice the morning going.
VIII. Tea in the Afternoon
Elrond had noticed the empty chair at breakfast.
He had noticed it with the particular quality of attention of a man who has learned, over a very long life, to monitor certain chairs without making a performance of monitoring. He noted it, said nothing, and attended to his morning.
There were letters — there are always letters, wherever Elrond establishes himself, from those who want counsel or records or the simple reassurance of a reply written with care. He read them. He answered three. He set two aside for further thought. He spoke with members of his household about a leaking roof, a dispute over the kitchen garden's boundaries that had apparently been simmering for a decade, and a request for his opinion on a matter of some historical record. He resolved each thing in turn, with the even-handed competence of long practice.
He was distracted the whole morning.
His thoughts kept returning, with the fidelity of a compass needle finding north, to the shadow under the oaks.
He had made a rule about Maglor and he had kept it with some effort: space, silence, the solitude that was as necessary to him as breath. Pressing a man who had spent centuries utterly alone was not kindness; it was simply a different kind of harm. He knew this. He had reminded himself of it regularly.
He reminded himself of it through the morning letters. He reminded himself of it through the household matters. He reminded himself of it very firmly once more as noon arrived, and then he asked the kitchen for a tea tray — the Vanyar blend, the one Maglor had said nothing about but had drunk three cups of the one time it was offered — and he walked out through the flourishing portions of the garden, past the beds that cooperated, and into the shade of the oaks.
Maglor sat on the stone bench, utterly still, his hands in his lap, his eyes fixed on something very far from the garden.
"Maglor."
Nothing. The ferns continued their business. A bird in the upper branches expressed a brief opinion.
"Maglor."
Elrond hardly ever raised his voice without cause, and he raised it now — not much, but with a particular quality in it, the note that costs something to use, that means I am here, come back. Maglor startled like a man surfacing from deep water, blinking, locating himself by degrees: the oak, the bench, the moss, the tray, Elrond.
"Forgive me," he said, and his voice was rough from disuse. "You have been trying to reach me for some time."
"A minute. Perhaps two." Elrond set the tray on the bench with the careful economy of long practice making difficult things seem ordinary. He poured without asking. "I hope you will forgive the interruption. It is rather chilly in the shade, and it seemed to me you might be persuaded to share a cup of tea."
He handed Maglor the cup, and settled himself on the bench with every appearance of a man with nowhere else to be and no particular agenda, which was not entirely untrue — he had arranged, quietly, to be nowhere else.
Maglor wrapped his hands around the cup. The somewhere-else began, slowly, to recede from his eyes.
The bird in the oak made another observation, decided it had said enough, and departed. The garden held its ordinary peace around them.
"Maglor," Elrond said, presently. Not forcefully. The way one opens a door that one cannot quite be sure is locked.
"I know," Maglor said. "I was lost again. I am aware of it."
"I was not going to say that."
A pause. "What were you going to say?"
Elrond considered the distance between the oaks. "I was going to say that you were thinking about Elros."
Something moved in the deep water of Maglor's expression — a tightening, a recognition. "Is it so plain?"
"Only to me. And only because I know you both rather well." He looked at Maglor with that particular quality of attention that meant the full weight of a very long mind being brought unhurriedly to bear. "Whatever it is, you would help yourself if you would simply ask."
"I cannot." Too roughly. He smoothed it. "Whatever answer you give will cost you something to give. I will not ask you to carry—"
"Maglor." And here Elrond did a thing unexpected: he smiled. Not the diplomatic smile, not the counseling smile, but the one that arrived when something privately, genuinely amused him — and Maglor, despite everything, found himself at a complete loss. "I know that in your mind I am still in part that small, frightened boy you took in from the ruins. I know that I am, in some portion of your thinking, perpetually nine years old and hiding behind a door." He tilted his head with the slight precision of a man who has chosen his words with care. "I would hate to make extravagant claims about my own capacities, but I have spent some considerable time since then in work that has given me a degree of practice with difficult conversations. If something troubles you, I am quite confident in my ability to provide proper counsel."
Maglor looked at him for a long moment. Something shifted in his face — not quite laughter, but its distant cousin, arrived unexpectedly after a long journey.
"You are enormously ancient," he said.
"Enormously," Elrond agreed, without the smallest trace of false modesty. "Shall we use some of that antiquity productively?"
The silence that followed was, for the first time, not the silence of a man hiding. It was the silence of a man gathering himself. There is a difference, and Elrond recognized it.
"Did he suffer?" Maglor said at last, and his voice was stripped of all performance. "At the end. Did it hurt?"
Elrond did not pretend to misunderstand. "No," he said, and the word was steady and without hesitation. "He did not."
"His mind—"
"Remained his own until near the last. He was not diminished in the ways you are imagining." A pause, measured. "His life was long, as the lives of Men are reckoned — longer than most, and not without achievement. He was prosperous, and more peaceful than might have been expected, and he had great success in what he set his hand to. He was in good health for most of his years. He died as he lived, which is to say: decisively, and in full possession of himself."
Maglor was silent. He appeared to be studying the cup with great attention, though the cup had done nothing to warrant it.
"The fault is not yours," Elrond said quietly. "What you taught us — it held. It was sufficient. More than sufficient." He let that settle for a moment before continuing. "You raised us to fifty-five. Fifty-five is not nothing."
"I went mad before you made your choices," Maglor said. "Before the Valar summoned you. I left. I disappeared. If that shaped—"
"It did not." And here Elrond's voice carried something that was not quite authority and not quite plea but held qualities of both. "The news had not reached us when we were called. We did not know, and it did not touch what we chose. We chose freely, from what we were, because that is what the Valar intended and that is what we did." He held Maglor's gaze steadily. "Elros chose mortality because mortality was the truth of his nature. It was always his nature. You did not drive him from Elvish life. You were his home in it, for the years he had one."
Something in Maglor's jaw tightened and then carefully released. He said nothing. The light shifted in the oak above them.
"He was pained," Elrond said then, more quietly, "by your disappearance."
"I know. That is why I—"
"More than pained." Elrond chose his next words with the care of a craftsman selecting the right tool, in the knowledge that the wrong one does irreparable damage. "He told me, once — not long after the news reached us — that in those first years he sometimes thought he had chosen wrongly. Not because he doubted the truth of himself. Because the thought of mortality meant: there will never be enough time to find him. And the thought of Elvish life meant: there is still time."
Maglor's hands tightened around the cup. He did not speak.
"He looked for you," Elrond said. "For all his years. He kept a patrol — rangers whose only commission was to walk the shores and watch. He never explained it officially. But every man who served in that patrol knew whose face they were watching for, and what finding it would mean."
The silence was different now. Denser.
"What became of them?" Maglor asked, and his voice was very careful.
"His eldest son disbanded them after his death. He did not know their purpose — to him they were simply an old tradition with no recorded origin. He saw no reason to maintain them." Elrond looked steadily at Maglor. "But Elros kept them. Every year of his life, he kept them."
The bird returned to the oak above them, said something brief and final, and left again. The ferns continued their patient work. The moss on the stone was very soft, as moss in old gardens tends to be.
"I did not know that," Maglor said at last.
"No," said Elrond. "I thought you might not." He refilled the cup without making anything of it.
The afternoon light moved between the oaks, finding its way through in small pieces. Somewhere in the garden the sensible flowers were doing their sensible work. Here, in the corner that no one bothered with, in the shadow that suited difficult things, the silence was not empty. It was the silence of something finding its shape.
"Is it better?" Elrond asked. "To know?"
Maglor considered this with the full gravity it deserved, which took a little while.
"Yes," he said at last. The word was rough, and slow, and entirely without performance. "Yes, it is better to know."
The shadow of the oak lay over them both, long and patient. The cup was warm. The afternoon was very still. Elrond did not say: you are forgiven, because he was too honest for what was not yet fully true. He did not say: all shall be well, because he was too careful for promises outside his keeping.
But he stayed. He poured another cup. He let the oak be the oak and the moss be the moss and the afternoon be simply an afternoon — ordinary and unremarkable and, quietly, enough.
Coda
Somewhere in the Halls of Mandos, which are not precisely what the living imagine and not precisely what the dead expect, Finwë the King waits with what patience the long years make, or demand. He has spoken with most of his grandsons there, in the manner in which the dead speak. He has spoken with Fëanor, which conversation is not recorded, but is known to have been long and is believed to have cost them both something real, and to have been, in the end, necessary.
Whether Curufin, in those halls, has spoken of Maglor, is not known to us. The dead keep their own counsel, and Námo does not publish his records.
But there is this, which is known: Celebrimbor, son of Curufin, was not a man without understanding. He knew the history he had been born into. He knew what the Oath had cost, and what it made of those who swore it, and he had spent his life in the deliberate effort to be something other than what the Oath demanded. He had tried to make beauty from inheritance rather than merely wreckage. He had been deceived, and used, and destroyed — and he had not stopped trying until he could not.
This is not nothing. Not even in Mandos.
And Maglor — who had walked the shore for ages beyond counting, who could not find a song adequate to Alqualondë or adequate to his father's death or adequate to the morning he left two children sleeping and did not come back — sat in the shadow of the oak trees in Elrond's garden and drank his tea.
The oaks grew their slow way upward, as they always had, indifferent to whether anything flourished in their shadow. The ferns persisted with their particular stubbornness. The moss was soft on the stone.
It was a beginning. Small, and very quiet, and real in the way that small, quiet things are real when the large and burning things have burned themselves out at last.
It was not nothing.
Here this account ends, for now. What followed is another story, and not all of it has yet been told.