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Part 1 of The Stars of Hell , Part 3 of Non canon stories of my au's or au's of my au's
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The Stars of hell episode 1 script(original version)

Summary:

Charlie and crew has won against the exorcist army and Adam and now its back to attempting the redemption.
Heavy and crew fight Merasmus........
Mike has to go get stuff....thats it.
This is like the second draft of my script so once I have actually finished the pilot I would prefer everyone to watch the pilot whenever it releases if it does get released.

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(See the end of the work for notes.)

Work Text:

The stars of hell episode 1 script draft 2:

Scene 1 :”Flashback” ( calm narrating voice)

Once upon a time there was a being called Lord who was created from nothing or from anyone, he was a being of pure good who was the most powerful being ever….but he started feeling a bit lonely so he created the kingdom of heaven and the first five angels; Gabriel, Micheal, Azrael, Raphael and then finally my father Lucifer but there was a mistake with the last one he was created as a child so Lord decided to take the responsibility of raising him like his own son. Many years later Lucifer grew up to become a high ranking angel like his brothers.

Then one day he decided to create something different and unique from his other creations…humans powerless versions of angels but still good. The first were Adam the first man and my mom Lillith but something happened between the two which made them split, thus she was alone and scared but what she never expected was one of the angels to comfort her and be in love with her… the two of them got together and wanted a friend and so since adam’s new wife eve was hungry lucifer gave her an apple from a tree that was forbidden and she ate it….due to this mistake Lord punished the two of them and created a new realm called hell for lilith and Lucifer. Due to this Lucifer lost himself, felt awful but knew that he did something bad and paid the price for it but Lillith chose not to back then but instead empower the people who arrived down there with her songs and made hell a liveable place. Lord having felt bad about his mistakes made an awful choice for everyone else and left the kingdom of heaven…… He made the 4 arch angels in charge but they were very busy so sera had to step into power who made a sad choice. She had made Adam the leader of an army that would be sent down every once a year to exterminate those who used to be humans while he left and disappeared before he knew how awful it had become. But he had someone he believed to become better and train them to all be better and refix the mistakes my family made as his granddaughter I princess charlie morningstar am inspired by his goodness to help everyone become good if they want to be good but recently I started my hotel to do that mission and oh boy people have thought of it as a joke but my girlfriend vaggie believed in me and then we gained some staff and 2 guests and we fought the exorcist army when they came back but killed adam by mistake and honestly I wish we could have redeemed him but oh well I guess and now the hotel is popular now so I honestly wonder what’s next for us all.

 

Scene 2: “present”

“Camera pans out to the final moments of the actual hazbin hotel season 1”

Everyone: Everyone: And then tomorrow it will be a (########)' happy day in Heeeelllll!

“Then Charlie opens up the doors into the new and improved Hazbin hotel”

The camera pans onto the rest of the hotel while the others make noise of awe”

Angel dust in a quick tone: IM GETTING THE ROOM WITH THE TOP BUNK>:)

Husk following behind in a OY tone: HEY SLOW DOWN ANGEL!
“Then they start chasing each other like two little kids playing tag before almost tripping until lucifer makes sure they dont get hurt by summoning a mattress underneath them”

Lucifer in a prideful tone: hehe slow down you two we just got done don't we all want to explore a bit more and see what we made together shall we folks.

Nifty in an excited tone: YIPPE!

Niffty in an maniacal tone: CAN”T WAIT TO KILL ALL THE NEW KIND OF BUGS I FIND HEHAHAHAHAHAHHA hehehe.

Charlie in a fake happy tone: Um me personally i think we should all just rest it has been a looong day after all.

Vaggie in a tired tone: Yes I know charlie but lets just see a bit maybe even sleep in one of the new rooms char?

Alastor popping up from behind in his shadowy way

Alastor in his non caring tone:Well I personally say lets rest to avoid seeing the disaster known as your father’s work am I right Charlotte hahaha.

Lucifer in a hurt and mocking tone: oh no my feelings have been hurt by a bellehopper which by the way lost to a guy I easily won against hm.

Alastor in an irritated tone: haha just because you won doesn’t mean you can mock me you know I bet your designs are just du-

“Cuts to Angel dust’s, Husk and Niffty’s room that lucifer made for them being according to their liking while Alastor is shocked”

Alastor in shocked tone: ucks…

Lucifer in prideful tone: well how is that belle hopper hm.

Alastor in annoyed tone: oh please there is no way they like the joint ro-

Niffty in a really happy tone: I LOVE THIS ROOM!

Husk in awkward tone: um thanks sir for the room even if its shared.

Angel dust in a naughty tone: hehe I know what im going to do with this.

Vaggie in tired tone: oh my goodness angel pls don’t tell me you plan to do what i think you want to do.

Angel dust in annoyed tone: oh come ooooooooonnn va####

Vaggie in angry tone: HEY! You know I don’t like being called like that

Angel dust in an apologetic tone: yeesh sorry vags cant i do a bit of trolling

Charlie in a trying to de escalate things tone: angel please remember this a redemption facility.

Angel dust in drama queen tone(I think its called that): Yeah yeah toots I remember i was just teasing husk hehe

Niffty in curious tone while lucifer and alastor are staring at each other in hatred: so will i get to watch if it happens

Angel dust and Husk in blushing tone: I ugh what

Vaggie in protective mode: niffty NO! Dont thats not for someone your age

Niffty in a whining tone: but im 22!

Charlie: how about we get you some chocolate milk and rice cakes would that make you feel better?

Niffty in a shocked and happy tone: wait REALLY?

Charlie in a reassuring tone: Yep niffty only if you behave

Niffty in a really excited tone: YIPPEE!

“Then niffty rushes to the bed to sleep so that she could get the rice cakes and chocolate milk”

Alastor in a teasing tone: You know giving Nif more sugar is probably going to make her more deranged.

Vaggie in angry tone: hey Al dont be mean to charlie

Lucifer in a more angry tone then vaggie: Yeah bambi don’t be mean to my daughter OR I WILL-

Charlie in a calming down tone: Dad stop niffty,husk and Angel have fallen asleep and as for you Al your a manager I could fire you and make you lose all of your entertainment in a matter of seconds dont test me or my dad….

Alastor in a slightly annoyed tone: Alright fine charlotte and shortie I’ll stop

Lucifer in annoyed tone : OY

Vaggie in a mildly worried tone: Anyways lets just explore the rest of the hotel shall we folks?

Alastor and Lucifer after calming down: urgh fine vaggie(lucifer says maggie instead)

Charlie in kinda excited tone: alr vags lead the way(points the way out of the room then they all start walking out of the room to explore)

(cue montage of them exploring the hotel rooms like the kitchen’s, other rooms, and other floors of the hotel like the montage lasts for 30 seconds so go wild with any references to things you like animators)

“Now charlie and vaggie are waving goodbye to lucifer and alastor as they go into their new room”

Lucifer in sille dad tone: Bai char char, Bai maggie

Alastor at the same time: Bye Charlotte and Vagatha

Charlie and vaggie at the same time: Bye Dad/Sir and bye Al/Alastor

“Then they go inside their room”

Lucifer: aw my little girl is all grown up

Alastor in taunting tone: yet you failed to teach her that hell is bad for a reason

Lucifer: You know if you hate my daughter’s ideas and dreams then why not leave.

Alastor in joking tone: Haha well its because its entertaining to watch someone suffer while trying to accomplish something they can never achieve

Lucifer snapping back tone: well then how about you find that energy in getting someone to really love you in any way possible

Alastor in a confused tone: and what does that mean king

Lucifer just dusting his clothes: oh nothing bambi lets just go to sleep now we all need to rest

Camera pans behind lucifer as he moves his hat a bit.

Lucifer in taunting tone: wellp ba bai Alastorindeer hope you leave soon so that I can get rid of that god awful annoying radio room(while walking away to his room)

Camera pans to alastor

Alastor in an annoyed tone but forcing himself to calm down tone: well bbbai shorty(whispers: hope he leaves soon)

“Then camera turns around when Alastor turns around the room”

Alastor whispering: ergh I will show him not to mess with me

“Then we cut into charlie and vaggie getting ready to sleep”

Charlie in the bed + tired tone: wow its been a long couple of months am i right vags

Vaggie jumping into the bed: Yep a long 6 months

Charlie reminiscing: hm i remember when we just opened up the hotel yeesh time’s been passing by so quickly

Vaggie: yep but sadly we did face a loss

Charlie in sorrowful tone: yeah pentious hm

Vaggie then soothes charlie’s sorrow: Im sure he made it to heaven I bet he’l encounter emily or someone that i knew in my past

Charlie in more hopeful tone: yeah hopefully

Vaggie: well Im off to bed see you tomorrow char

Charlie about to sleep: good night vags

“Then charlie closes her eyes while she says in her head: I hope things get better soon”

Scene 3 fnaf part/minnesota:

“Alarm beeps”

“Mike wakes up from sleeping then he starts getting ready for work”

Mike while getting ready to leave: Alright abs Im getting leaving for work are missing any groceries?

Abby who is in the living room comes into the picture to see off mike: We don’t really need anything Mike but while your gone can you get some ice cream for me please.

Mike: I don’t know Abby think about the prices.

Abby: but please(does that one kinda anime style face with puppy eyes and stuff)

Mike hesitates at first

Mike: sighs fine abby I’ll try
Abby does anime kinda like face whenever an anime character gets happy: YAY THANK YOU MIKE YOUR THE BEST BROTHER EVER!

Mike: your welcome abby see you later

Abby: bye mike

“Then mike goes outside into the car and then drives to work while its a wide camera shot so we see the surroundings (we see things like posters referencing other pieces of media and rem is also there near a trash can sleeping as a reference to the indie show called alethophobia then we get a montage of mike working then him getting out of work and ordering ice cream for abby”

“Mike then goes to sit at a table while waiting for his order to be completed”

Peter while reading a newspaper: so the last place you worked at got destroyed in an accident huh

Mike in a confused tone: huh what are you talking about sir

Peter putting down newspaper

Peter in detective tone: it says in the article here that the freddy’s fazbear restaurant got destroyed recently and YOU were the last person to get hired there so tell me what happened there while you worked there

Mike in an even more confused tone: uh who even are you?

Peter in realization tone: Oh whoops i forgot to introduce myself my name is Peter. What is your name?

Mike in slightly worried tone: Mike….Mike schmidt

Peter: oh nice name so tell me what happened there

“Mike then notices that his order is here now and quickly rushes to get the order and leave but peter notices and asks hey where are you going”

Mike having gotten his order and defensive tone: Look kid Im not interested in talking

Peter: look what happened there

Mike sighs before finally saying: Look kid things happened that traumatized me and my sister I dont want to talk about it so leave me alone

Mike leaves the shopping mall and sees golden freddy all mangled up near by while they say ITS ME THE ONE WHO YOU LEFT BEHIND again and again before mike gets back in the car and starts having a flashback’

Scene 4: flashback

“Police sirens are heard while police tape is put around Mike and abby’s house due to the death of Their aunt Jane”

Police cop 1 while investigating the sight where the body was located: wow no blood huh what we gotta deal with a real life ice truck killer now.

“Then the blood analyst comes”

Police guy 1 in a joking tone:“Hey John! Tonights the nights eh?”

Blood analyst guy in serious tone: alr what am I dealing with paul rudd

Police guy 1 in serious tone now: well we are dealing with someone who died but no blood is around the body…do you think someone decided to become the ice truck killer but irl

Blood analyst guy: no(gets closer to the body) they were strangled to death rudd

Police guy 1: Ah i see so we just got a case of the choking eh

Blood splatter analyst: Hey were there any witnesses?

Police guy 1: yeah there were two…relatives who were the ones who called um officer jake and one of the child protective services guys are currently interrogating them as we speak

Blood splatter analyst: why is child protective services involved in this

Police guy 1: i dunno know but hopefully we can solve the crime soon so i can go to sleep.

Blood analyst guy: yep lets hope we all solve it soon

“Camera cuts to living room where mike and abby are being interrogated”

Police officer 2: Hello my name is officer jake and Im here to ask you a couple of questions mr…

Mike: Mike..mike schmidt’s my name

Police officer 2: Alr mr mike so here is the first question where were you while the murder took place

Mike: I was at work

Police guy 2: Alr thanks for answering the first question, Now here is the next question; where do you work at

Mike: I worked the night shift at freddy fazbear’s pizzeria since the last five days including today

Police officer guy 2: alr alr now 3rd question…

Mike is ready to answer but then hears the question:”what happened at freddy’s while you were there?

“Then Mike starts having ptsd to what happened there so he gains flashes of the memories of afton,Vanessa getting shot, The animatronics and garret.”

“Then while mike is having his ptsd moment the police officer asks if he is alright then mike finally decides to snap back to reality after the cop mentions the cps”

Police guy 2: Alr you know what we should leave now we need to go check up on Officer vanessa

“Then the police officer guy 2 tells the others to call off the case for sometime due to vanessa having been shot”

“Then the cops leave while abby goes to talk with mike”

Abby worried: Mikey you ok

Mike realizing abby is there

Mike trying to reassure abby: Yeah im fine abs

Abby still worried: will they take me away one day

Mike reassuring her: no no they wont I promise I’ll get a job to make sure we can be taken care of alright abs I promise

Abby: Alr mike

“Mike now has a face being glad she feels better”

Mike: alr abs now go to sleep alr

Abby: alright mikey

“Then flashback ends”

Present:

Mike in the car talking to himself in his head

Mike: im glad i was able to find a job but i still worry for abby and vanessa but now I probably have to deal with that child stalker person if they are following me right now

Then camera pans to car driving into the neighbourhood while the screen turns black

Scene 5: Present:

The camera transitions into slowly entering the hazbin hotel as we see a crowd forming at the entrance while the camera pans into the lobby of the hotel and we see vaggie and the others except for charlie trying to clean up things for the amount of people trying to join the hotel”

“Charlie comes down from the stairs”

Charlie just waking up from sleeping tone: Good morning guys

“Vaggie quickly turns her head around”

Vaggie trying to calm down: Oh hey char how are you

“Then she quickly turns her neck around then sees nifty nearly dropping something before stopping her from doing so”

Charlie still sleepy: Huh guys whats going on

Husk trying to set up the bar quickly: uh we have many people wanting to join the hotel now

Charlie in shocked tone: WAIT WHAT

Alastor trying to keep the others in from coming inside the hotel: “Well thanks to our great performance IN WHICH I DID THE MOST AMOUNT OF WORK- the hotel has gained more popularity

Charlie in excited tone: OH MY GOD OH MY GOD OH MY GOD I NEED TO GET READY UH HANG ON GUYS IM COMING

“Then charlie gets ready then comes down the stairs and gets ready to help the other sinners check in then alastor opens the hotel doors and it gets run over with guests while he gets ran over by the amount of guests and charlie gets very excited”

Guests: Where can we sign in to kill some angels

“Rey in the background hearing that but no one hears him yell WHAT!

Charlie also turning into face of shock

Charlie in a very concerned tone: what

“Cut to montage of charlie just hearing why different guests want to stay at the hotel and she keeps rejected them due to them being just wrong”

“Then after montage now there are only two guests left that charlie hasn't checked in yet”

Charlie in frustrated tone: ugh GOD!

Vaggie in worried tone: char you ok?

Charlie: no im not vags its just that the fact no one wanted to redeem themselves but instead wanted to be a part of war or have s## with angel which BY THE WAY IS WRONG BECAUSE ANGEL DIDNT WANT THAT so yeah that sucks…god i should just quit and do my job as a ruler like my mom wanted

Vaggie shocked: whoah whoah whoah no you should not charlie just because we have one failed day doesn't mean there is tomorrow plus we still have the others like husk, Nifty, Angel dust,Your dad, Alastor and Cherri bomb….you know now that I think about it where are those two alright besides that it doesnt matter and you also have me so dont worry char we will all get through this together.

Charlie calming down: hm thanks vags

“Then the final two guests arrive to the counter”

Vaggie in a reassuring tone: alr char I’l deal with these two

Vaggie gets up and walks over to them: ahem Welcome to the Hazbin Hotel would you like to join our redemption program and try to join heaven

Rey and baxter: actually Yes we would

Baxter in his science guy tone: i would like a place to stay cuz yeesh the apartment prices are really bad

Rey in normal tone: and I would like to join the redemption program to go to heaven and finish up some unfinished business nothing bad though.

“Charlie’s eyes beam up and she gets happy”

Charlie in a curious tone: Wait you guys want to join to redeem yourselves

Then nifty shows up while rey tries asking can i bring family along to the hotel”

Niffty: so is the fish guy the new pentious

Rey while niffty is saying the above: Hey is it possible to bring family as a part of the redemption proje-

Charlie and Vaggie and Husk since angel is sleeping: NO

Rey in background: oh nevermind then

Husk: wait what are your names

Baxter in an introductory tone: My name is Baxter and Im a scientist

Rey in an introductory tone: Rey is my name um Im a worker for for Carmilla carmine’s weapons industries

Husk in a shocked tone: Wait so your soul is owned by Carmilla carmine

Rey in non chalant tone: nah i just work for something owned by her

Husk in a understanding tone: Ah i see

Niffty in a curious tone: wait charlie if he works for that overlord should he be kicked out

Charlie: no because he is willing to redeem himself so lets give him a chance right guys

Charlie: Ahem Welcome to the Hazbin hotel you two

“Then Vaggie checks in Rey and Baxter”

Vaggie in welcoming tone: Alright Mr Rey and Mr Baxter. Mr Rey your room is on the first floor next to the stairs and Mr Baxter your room on floor 7 next to the balcony.

Baxter in a question tone: Um can I have the basement

Vaggie in an angry/concerned tone:...why do you want the basement?

Baxter: well in order to do my science experiments of course

“Vaggie raises eye brows”

Vaggie:....this is a redemption center so basically no science experiments

“Baxter sighs”

Baxter: fine can I do my experiments and get the basement if I join the hotel’s redemption program

“Vaggie then puts on a deciding face”

Vaggie shrugs while saying alr

“Then vaggie switches baxter’s keys with the one to the basement”

Vaggie in a commanding tone: also niffty the basement is very dirty so can you go clean it as well so that Baxter can get comfortable living here

Niffty in excited tone after looking baxter abit more carefully: ALRIGHTY THEN HEHEHEHE~

Baxter now in a concerned tone: uh what does that mean?

Nifty: oh nothing~

Baxter in worried tone: oh no

Husk in a tired tone: uh just go you two”

“Then the camera cuts to baxter opening the basement and he and nifty walk in at the same time”

“Baxter looking around the basement”

Baxter in a curious: hm strange it doesnt look that dirty i wonder what the princess meant by di-

“Nifty then take off the covers which expose so much dirt and that its a very messy basement”

“Baxter puts on the most shocked face ever while niffty says”

Niffty in an excited tone: hm wow this is very messy guess I get to clean all of it

“Then we cut back to the rest of the hotel introducing rey around the hotel”

Charlie: so tell me is there anything you need that’s special like do you have special needs like autism or something like that

Rey: well no but i do need to be able to fly when i need it

Husk: wait you also have wings as well

Rey: Yep i do

Husk: wow guess we the only guys here who have wings well other then lucifer

Rey: wait wha-

Charlie: lucifer is my dad so yeah he is staying here for a bit

Rey: Ah i see

“Angel dust wakes up from the couch”

Angel dust: wow that dream made me feel i-”cut to the invincible title card for 5 seconds”

“Angel dust then notices rey”

Angel dust: uh who is this

“Charlie notices angel is now up”

Charlie: Oh angel your up now well this is rey he and someone else are checking into the hotel

Angel dust: so we got two new guests now hm thats…impressive toots

Charlie: aw thanks angel

Angel dust then looks around again and notices alastor is missing

Angel dust: uh guys where is alastor

Charlie: oh he is in his room just napping

Angel dust: ah i see

Angel dust: so new guy whats your name

Rey: oh my name is Rey

Angel dust: uh uh alr rey skywalker welcome to the hazbin hotel

Charlie in angry tone: ANGEl

Angel dust: what at least i didnt call him a clown

Charlie and Vaggie in angry tone: ANGEL

Angel dust: what?

Charlie: thats very rude to call him that

Rey: no its fine I got into an accident once that made my hair this colour

Angel dust in questioning tone: and what was that accident?

Rey in a dead pan tone: I accidentally fell into a bucket of paint which messed up my black hair to make this clown colour

Angel dust: yeesh you got the bad luck treatment

Rey:sadly yes but hopefully redemption is very much possible so that my life can be changed around and my luck is better then

Husk: yeah bud we all hope that redemption is possible

Rey: well you know i feel like going to my room and just getting used to my room but it was very nice meeting all of you

Everyone else: Thank you Rey and we hope you enjoy your stay at the hazbin hotel

Rey: your welcome guys

“Then a very loud noise from the basement prompting the others to go check it out while before rey goes into his room he looks at the tiny gap in his suitcase and smiles a bit but then goes back to not smiling so he then enters his room while we cut to vaggie in her head saying why do i feel like I recognize him”

Scene 6: Present

The camera cuts to a bird on a tree about to yawn then gun and shooting noises and magic noises being blasted everywhere and explosion noises appear then the camera quickly pans to whats happening.

We then see demo man shooting grenades at merasmus along with scout helping cap the point(the fight with merasmus lasts for a total of 5 minutes but there is barely any dialogue

Demoman yelling: COME ON SCOUT STAND ON THE BLOODEE POINT

Scout panicking: im trying im trying its just-

Scout avoids a blast from merasmus

Scout still in panicking tone: He keeps targeting me

Demoman irritated: ergh where is heavy and medic right bloodee now

Soldier coming from rocket jumping: dont worry guys me and pyro will help
Merasmus hearing that:"Soldier! Never anger a magician!"

“Then soldier shoots at merasmus before absolutely getting destroyed because he accidentally did the equalizer taunt and f####### dies”

“Merasmus then laughs”

“Then sniper shoots at merasmus and he dodges his blast so they go into a fight while merasmus starts saying some taunts”

Sniper while trying to avoid dying: SPY AND PYRO NOW SHOOT AND KEEP HIM DESTRACTED TILL HEAVY AND MEDIC GET OUT OF THE RESPAWN ROOM

“Spy and pyro then show up and start attacking”

“During all the chaos the camera pans into the respawn room and shows heavy getting his weapon ready”

Medic showing up behind him with an ubercharge

Heavy: doktor are you ready?

Medic in crazy yell: hehhe I HAVE NO IDEA
“Then the two of them come out ubercharged and then they start shooting”

Merasmus noticing them: oh you really think turing bright will save you from your doom well YOUR WRONG BESBUS MERASMUS HRUAGH
“Then merasmus casts an explosion spell but all the mercs end up shooting him at the right time which kills him and they capture the point”

Merasmus getting up from after being knocked out: ergh you mercs may have beaten me today but fear not for one day you will all end up losing for once WHEN I SHALL RETURN FAREWELL MORTALS

“Then he teleports away”

Administrator on intercom: well done gentleman you’ve done it

Medic: WE HAVE DONE IT!

Victory screams by everyone

Heavy: thank you doctor.

Scout: hey fellas lets celebrate not dying to merasmus

Spy: hm that’s the smartest thing to have ever come out of your mouth scout.

Sniper: fellas lets not be rude now…any ways what should be at the party.

Pyro: mumbling noises(cake)

Demo man: Some scrumpee.

Engineer: some barbeque Texas style.

Scout: Hey wait a minute, where is soldier?

Soldier: hey guys I found some grape flavoured bonk (it's actually one of demo man’s grenades).

Everyone: SOLDIER NOOOO!

Soldier: what it cant be that ba-

“Everyone explodes and then some gib parts end up in the respawn machine hitting it and then an error message appears saying that location being sent to unknown”

“Scene 7: Present”

“The camera cuts to a thunder storm outside of mike Schmidt's house and cuts to him sleeping before waking up from a scream”

Mike wakes up and rushes to abby’s room to find her shivering in fear

Mike in a very worried tone: Abby what happened

Abby in a very scared tone: a nightmare happened

Mike cooling down: Abby you had a nightmare

Abby still in that tone: yes Mike and it felt really real

Mike in a very serious tone: alright abby tell me what happened in the nightmare.

“Then abby starts drawing her nightmares down and gives them to mike who when he starts looking at them turns from an already very worried face to wtf is going on face and starts getting concerned while the camera also pans to the drawings”

Mike in a very scared tone: abby please tell me you accidentally watched a horror movie and this is stuff from that

Abby still in that tone: I never watched a horror movie at all

“Mike then gets worried as he notices afton in the drawings more demonic, more powerful in the drawings”

“Mike then notices one of the drawings which depict vox in a fight with lucifer”

Mike: abs who is that guy with the tv head and what is he trying to do

Abby in a frightened: I dont know but in my nightmare he said something like “HELL WILL RISE”.

“Then mike relooks at the drawing again as the camera then focus on the vox part of the drawing”

Scene 8: Present back in hell

The camera then transitions to The vees tower a week ago as we go inside the place with Vox’s assistant following him telling him about Adam’s death and more while Vox is in his own world”

His assistant: So Sir what are you going to do with the news that angels can be killed

Vox snapping back to reality: Uh what

Assistant: uh that angels are killable

Vox: oh yeah about that i found out about it earlier so yeah um i need to talk with the other VEES so if you can excuse me i got to leave now so get out of my sight now…

Assistant in frightened: yes boss

“Then everyone else leaves as vox goes into a room where the other vees are then sits down at a seat near them”

Velvette: so vox why did you call us

Vox: well its because of how now we know the angels can be killed right

Valentino: yeah they can

Vox: you know what this means right

Valentino in a confused tone:  Uh no i dont please elaborate

Velvette frustrated

Velvette in frustrated tone: Valentino this means we can have a war with heaven

Valentino blinks in silence

Valentino: Im sorry what

Vox: yep you remember how the hazbin hotel residents killed The army’s leader right

Valentino: yes

Vox: Do you know what they probably will do due to that happening

Valentino: Uh they will react

Vox: indeed val and how do you think they will react

Velvette: by starting a war

Vox: bingo exactly velvette so what do you think they will want now

Velvette: war cuz the hotel f########## killed that one fat### leader who was leading the army

Vox: yes indeed vel but here is my plan

Valentino: oh what is it~

Vox in evil planning tone:: we use the hotel’s reputation to start A HELL WIDE UPRISING WE LITERALLY HAVE THE CHANCE TO BECOME GODS WHO IS WITH ME

Silence fills the room

Valentino in confused tone: uh i know you wont like this but i dont understand what you mean by that or how does the hotel have any involvement in this plan

Vox:........

Velvette: yeah vox how do they even have any relation to this idea which by the way is an already god awful idea to even try like what kind of idiot would try to do one of the worst ideas i ever heard of

Vox: well they are related Because they proved angels can be killed so we use the princesses hotel’s reputation so that we turn it against them and make all of hell follow us and then we attack heaven

Valentino in a bet making tone: hey vox if your plan fails i would like to have 15 dollars

Vox in cocky tone: very well then but if I win i get 17 dollars so do we have a deal

Valentino: deal vox

Velvette while rolling her eyes: ugh boys

“Then the camera cuts to the gabriel apostate of hate boss fight being played on a laptop that valentino is playing ultrakill on while vox then goes to his office then he walks up the stairs then he sits down a chair that is surrounded by multiple tvs then wires starts coming up the stairs and connects to the back of his head and then he opens his eyes and he starts laughing like a maniac

Scene 9: Epilogue:

“Then the credits roll………..until the title card of T.A.B.S appears where it glitches and then it reverses to when Charlie says welcome to the hazbin hotel”

We then cut to that playing out on a screen with many other screens with an entity in a chair watching”

Spring trap/manifesto: well well seems like they are stronger then we thought

Spring trap: and they even killed their first man very easily with a FILTHY janitor “sighs” well guess we will need help I suppose.

Manifesto: but ” Looks to a tv screen and turns the footage to the final scene in hazbin hotel season 1 episode 8” I think I know how we can ask help from”

“Then We see manifesto get away from the chair while one of the screen quickly has a five second catnip appearance or at least his eyes are shown”

Spring trap: Well should we leave now

Manifesto: yeah we should but what do you think will happen to this place

Spring trap: I dont know but im sure that once this is all over you can be back with your family again

Manifesto looks away

Manifesto: understood boss….understood

Scene 8: Epilogue

“We then cut to lute walking to the garden of eden”

“While she is walking towards there we see emily trying to calm down some people who are protesting about the exterminations”

Protesters in an angry tone: WHAT OTHER SECRETS HAVE YOU ALL BEEN HIDING FROM US ALL!!!!!

Emily in worried tone: Everyone calm down I will answer your questions if you let me be able to speak

Abel then enters the picture confused

Abel in a confused tone: Hey em whats going-

“Then abel proceeds to end up getting hit very badly by some protesters making him get knocked out and emily makes an oh sh## face”

“Then Emily starts struggling trying to calm things down then camera pans to lute’s face looking at the crowd one last time before reaching the garden”

“Lute opens the gate to the garden and walks into The garden’s beaches”

Lute yelling at Lilith while walking towards her: LIllith!

Lute in angry tone: Adam is dead. Your deal is done and I'm in charge now. Your brat is threatening the very foundation of Heaven. And if you want to stay here, *leans down and pointing at the sea* you're going down there *points at the woman*, and stopping that b#####. You understand me...Lilith?

Lillith:….excuse me?

Lute: Do I need to remind you what your deal was lillith”

Lillith: If I say yes then what?

“Then the song “Your deal” starts

 and when it ends slow clapping is heard”

manifesto: Well that was a fantastic show you two put on

“Then lute takes out her spear and goes murder mode”

Lute in angry tone: How did you get here demon

Spring trap: oh Im no demon or an angel for that matter LUTE

Lute: Huh how do you know my name and what do you mean your not an angel or human

Spring trap: how I know doesn’t matter and as for what I am that’s not important for now as Im here for a proposal to help you two fight a common enemy”

Lillith: You mean my daughter?

Manifesto: yes indeed because well “Summons a glass ball” The universe is like a piece of glass where one tiny mistake would “smashes the glass ball” destroy everything so what do you two say to the idea?

Lillith: hm fine

Lute: But what is your name then?

Spring trap: well I can go by many names

Manifesto: but you can call me Manifesto

Notes:

This was the project I have been building up to. But it is just one of the drafts so its not necessarily canon to T.S.O.H plus im making a new version of the pilot which is more dramatic,more sad and has more hints toward the horror aspect im heading for............