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A Veil in the Rear Palace Analysis

Summary:

A fic detailing and analysing my fic "A Veil in the Rear Palace." It's mostly to keep track of their complicated relationship. Any other ideas and theories would be greatly appreciated!! <333

Notes:

I'm not sure how many chapters I will have for this, so far I have 3, one for the chapters and than one for Maomao and Jinshi's personal development, but if anyone has any ideas please let me know!! <3

Chapter 1: Chapter Outlines

Chapter Text

Chapter 1 — The Princess Requests Freedom

Time

Opening of the story; before Maomao enters the Rear Palace.

Main plot

Lady Kan struggles against the expectations of her family and asks to temporarily escape her life before an arranged marriage or further political obligations can trap her.

Maomao: view of herself

She views Lady Kan as a necessary role rather than a free identity. She is useful to her family but does not feel fully in control of her own future.

Maomao: view of Jinshi

She has not yet met him or only knows public rumours about the beautiful manager of the Rear Palace.

Jinshi: view of himself

He remains fully embedded in his Rear Palace role and believes his public mask is effective.

Jinshi: view of Maomao

None yet.

Relationship development

No direct relationship; their parallel lives and hidden identities are established.

Theme

Freedom versus duty.

Major setup

  • Maomao’s double identity.
  • Family expectations.
  • Her use as a political resource.
  • Her desire for temporary anonymity.

Chapter 2 — The Final Banquet and Departure

Time

Several days after Chapter 1.

Main plot

Maomao prepares to enter the Rear Palace, attends a final banquet, and begins constructing the servant identity she will use there.

Maomao: view of herself

She sees Maomao as a temporary disguise that will allow Lady Kan to disappear.

Maomao: view of her family

She understands that even her escape has been negotiated and controlled by them.

Jinshi: view of Maomao

None yet.

Relationship development

The story prepares their meeting by showing how deliberately Maomao hides herself.

Theme

Performance and disguise.

Major setup

  • Her hair, freckles, servant clothing and blue ribbon.
  • Her ability to move between social roles.
  • The difference between the princess and the maid.

Chapter 3 — The Laundry Maid

Time

Beginning of Rear Palace employment.

Main plot

Maomao and Xiaolan enter the Rear Palace, are assigned to laundry duties, and begin learning its routines, gossip networks, plants, servants and internal politics.

Maomao: view of herself

She takes pride in successfully disappearing. She believes anonymity will allow her freedom and access to information.

Maomao: view of Jinshi

Initially only a rumoured beautiful eunuch who attracts attention from the other maids.

Jinshi: view of Maomao

Likely does not consciously know her yet.

Relationship development

They may pass one another without recognising the importance of the moment.

Theme

Anonymity and observation.

Important character development

Maomao begins enjoying Xiaolan’s companionship rather than treating her only as an information source.

Foreshadowing

Maomao’s inability to ignore medical mysteries will destroy her anonymity.

Chapter 4 — The Poisoned Children

Time

Three months after entering the Rear Palace, followed by approximately one month of illness and investigation.

Main plot

Maomao learns that Gyokuyou’s daughter and Lihua’s son are ill, identifies the white face powder as the likely cause, delivers anonymous warnings, and is later exposed by Jinshi after Lingli survives and the prince dies.

Maomao: view of herself

She wants to remain hidden but cannot ignore preventable suffering. Maomao’s medical conscience conflicts with Lady Kan’s strategic caution.

Maomao: view of Jinshi

Beautiful, arrogant, observant and dangerous. She recognises that he is performing charm and dislikes that he catches her.

Jinshi: view of himself

He is confident in his ability to manipulate servants and uncover the person behind the warning.

Jinshi: view of Maomao

She changes from an insignificant maid into a highly intelligent mystery. Her literacy, poison knowledge and composure fascinate him.

Relationship development

First true confrontation. Jinshi sees through one of her lies; Maomao realises he cannot be dismissed as merely ornamental.

Theme

Curiosity has consequences.

Key development

Maomao becomes Gyokuyou’s lady in waiting, placing her directly within Jinshi’s sphere.

Chapter 5 — Life at the Jade Pavilion

Time

Several days to several weeks after Chapter 4.

Main plot

Jinshi requests that Maomao make him an aphrodisiac, which causes Maomao to reminisce over a moment from her childhood.

Maomao: view of herself

She reluctantly accepts that she has become visible. She begins taking satisfaction in being valued for her mind.

Maomao: view of Jinshi

He is still manipulative and annoying, but increasingly useful and entertaining.

Jinshi: view of Maomao

He considers her a valuable resource and begins creating reasons to visit or involve her in his work.

Relationship development

Their repeated contact builds familiarity. Their dynamic becomes teasing rather than purely interrogative.

Theme

Usefulness and visibility.

Important scenes

  • Maomao settling into Jade Pavilion routines.
  • Gyokuyou enjoying the dynamic between Maomao and Jinshi.
  • Jinshi testing Maomao’s reactions.
  • Maomao observing cracks in his public persona.

Chapter 6 — The Crystal Pavilion

Time

Several weeks after Maomao joins Gyokuyou.

Main plot

The emperor commands Maomao to treat Lihua. Maomao forces her way into the Crystal Pavilion, discovers that the banned face powder is still being used, punishes the responsible attendant, and restores order.

Maomao: view of herself

Lady Kan emerges when authority and intimidation are needed. Maomao enjoys taking command more than she wishes to admit.

Maomao: view of Jinshi

She assumes he expects her to need his help and takes satisfaction in proving otherwise.

Jinshi: view of himself

He expects to become Maomao’s rescuer and use the debt to grow closer to her.

Jinshi: view of Maomao

His assumptions are overturned. She is far more commanding, physically forceful and socially capable than her background suggests.

Relationship development

Jinshi begins suspecting that Maomao is not exactly who she claims to be.

Theme

Hidden authority.

Key emotional point

Jinshi’s fascination expands beyond her medical ability to the contradictions in her identity.

Chapter 7 — Recovery and Growing Familiarity

Time
Several weeks after Lady Lihua's recovery.

Main plot
Maomao investigates the mysterious coloured text plates, recreates the coloured flames for Jinshi, prepares for the upcoming Garden Party, accidentally reveals her true appearance after her fake freckles are removed, and receives Jinshi's hairpin.

Maomao: view of herself
She continues separating Lady Kan from Maomao but begins recognising that she enjoys the ordinary life she has built. Her friendship with Xiaolan and excitement over her hobbies make her question whether she is becoming more than the role she created.

Maomao: view of Jinshi
She still finds him dramatic and irritating, but she notices genuine concern beneath his usual charm. His reaction to her fabricated past surprises her.

Jinshi: view of himself
He finds himself increasingly unable to treat Maomao as just another capable servant. He wants to comfort her but struggles to express it.

Jinshi: view of Maomao
He believes he finally understands why she is so guarded and independent. His curiosity begins giving way to genuine protectiveness.

Relationship development

  • Jinshi sees Maomao's true face for the first time.
  • They share their most personal conversation so far. 
  • Jinshi shows genuine vulnerability.
  • He gives Maomao his hairpin without expecting anything in return.

Theme
Identity, vulnerability and misunderstanding.

The Future
This chapter deepens Jinshi's emotional attachment while reinforcing the divide between Maomao's true identity and the life she presents to him, setting up the Garden Party and the growing tension surrounding her disguise.

 

Chapter 8 — The Garden Party

Time

Several weeks after Lihua’s recovery.

Main plot

At the garden party, Maomao causes minor trouble among officials, encounters Lahan and Lihaku, receives hairpins, observes a suspicious woman, identifies poison in Gyokuyou’s soup, and uncovers the switched dishes involving Lishu.

Maomao: view of herself

She enjoys being outside the Rear Palace and briefly indulges Lady Kan’s love of manipulation. She believes her poison tolerance makes her expendable but useful.

Maomao: view of Jinshi

She notices his absence, appearance, hairpin and importance. She accepts his help after being poisoned but still withholds part of what she knows.

Jinshi: view of himself

He is increasingly torn between his public responsibilities and personal concern for Maomao.

Jinshi: view of Maomao

She is brilliant but terrifyingly careless with herself. He no longer views her merely as a tool and begins believing he must protect her from her own impulses.

Relationship development

A major trust milestone. She gives him medicine for the poisoned minister and cooperates with him while physically vulnerable.

Theme

Protection and self-worth.

Foreshadowing

  • Jinshi’s hidden identity.
  • The Garnet Pavilion conspiracy.
  • Maomao’s family connection.
  • Hairpins as pathways out of the Rear Palace.

Chapter 9 — The Hairpin and Departure

Time

The days following the garden party.

Main plot

Maomao processes the poisoning, arranges leave through Lihaku’s hairpin, investigates the suspicious figure, and prepares to leave the Rear Palace temporarily.

Maomao: view of herself

She believes she can manage the danger alone and treats leave as an opportunity to reconnect with her other life.

Maomao: view of Jinshi

His hairpin and concern carry more meaning than she wants to acknowledge.

Jinshi: view of Maomao

He is uneasy about her leaving but cannot openly prevent her.

Relationship development

Temporary separation begins revealing how much attention they pay to one another.

Theme

Distance and attachment.

Chapter 10 — The Kidnapping

Time

During Maomao’s leave; approximately one to two days.

Main plot

Maomao is kidnapped by estranged members of the La family who want the clan heirloom. She wakes in confinement, questions Lahan’s brother, and attempts to manipulate him into helping her escape.

Maomao: view of herself

Lady Kan takes control. She views vulnerability as unacceptable and immediately turns to threats, bargaining and strategy.

Maomao: view of Jinshi

Even while trapped, she wonders what he will think of her disappearance, revealing that his reaction matters to her.

Jinshi: view of Maomao

Mostly absent, but her disappearance would likely cause concern and confusion.

Relationship development

Maomao’s thoughts return to Jinshi even when family survival should dominate her attention.

Theme

Control under captivity.

Character development

Her fear of helplessness and darkness connects to her childhood trauma.

Chapter 11 — Blood, Rescue and Loyalty

Time

The evening after the kidnapping.

Main plot

Maomao confronts her grandfather and relatives as Lady Kan, violently defends Fengxian’s honour, is rescued by Rikuson and Lihaku, and then faces Lakan in a long strategic argument and loyalty test.

Maomao: view of herself

She becomes fully Lady Kan, using status, violence and intimidation without hesitation.

Maomao: view of her family

Her family is both her protection and her cage. Her loyalty remains absolute despite the emotional cost.

Maomao: view of Jinshi

Her position near him has become valuable enough that she argues fiercely to return, even while framing it as intelligence gathering.

Jinshi: view of Maomao

Mostly off-page; likely unaware of the full extent of danger she faced.

Relationship development

Maomao consciously prioritises family over Jinshi, establishing the central future betrayal risk.

Theme

Loyalty and ownership.

Key development

Lakan allows her to remain but increases surveillance and demands full reporting.

Chapter 12 — Deaths and the Garnet Pavilion

Time

Approximately one to two weeks later.

Main plot

Maomao investigates Kounen’s salt-related death, identifies the drowned woman from the garden party, infiltrates the Garnet Pavilion, discovers Fengming’s burns and honey connection, and uncovers the plot involving Lishu and Ah-Duo.

Maomao: view of herself

She thrives in investigation and shifts easily between servant, apothecary and Lady Kan’s political knowledge.

Maomao: view of Jinshi

She recognises genuine grief beneath his mask and provides answers partly because Kounen mattered to them both.

Jinshi: view of himself

He feels the weight of failure and personal loss. Maomao becomes someone he can rely upon when his judgement is emotionally compromised.

Jinshi: view of Maomao

Her knowledge continues to exceed her supposed background. He trusts her analytical conclusions and rewards her interests.

Relationship development

Their investigative partnership becomes emotionally grounded rather than purely practical.

Theme

Grief, guilt and hidden motives.

Key development

Maomao confronts Fengming and chooses a resolution that protects Ah-Duo from the cruelest truth.

Chapter 13 — Dismissal and Return to the La Clan

Time

Immediately after the Fengming case.

Main plot

Maomao says goodbye to Xiaolan, is dismissed from the Rear Palace, returns to the La estate, negotiates with Fengxian, and attends the banquet introducing Loulan.

Maomao: view of herself

She feels the loss of Maomao’s palace life but attempts to re-enter Lady Kan’s role without acknowledging grief.

Maomao: view of Jinshi

She expects him to visit the Verdigris House and is more affected by their separation than she admits.

Jinshi: view of Maomao

Her absence begins creating an emotional void, although his POV is not yet shown directly.

Relationship development

Physical separation reveals dependence.

Theme

The cost of returning home.

Key development

Lady Kan is forced back into public life just as Maomao’s life has become meaningful.

Chapter 14 — The Party and Go Wager

Time

Two days after dismissal.

Main plot

Maomao appears at a private party as part of the Verdigris House entertainment where she reunites with Jinshi. Her exhaustion and emotions cause her to suggest a wager.

Maomao: view of herself

She performs multiple identities in rapid succession and becomes increasingly aware of the strain.

Maomao: view of Jinshi

She feels hurt that he appears unaffected by her dismissal and tests how he treats Lady Kan without knowing she is Maomao.

Jinshi: view of Lady Kan

She is intelligent, politically dangerous and vaguely familiar.

Jinshi: view of Maomao

Her absence makes social events feel empty. When he encounters her as a courtesan, attraction, jealousy and concern collide.

Relationship development

The dual-identity tension becomes central. They interact as strangers while already emotionally attached.

Theme

Recognition without recognition.

Chapter 15 — The Buyout

Time

The following day.

Main plot

After losing to Jinshi she is to be bought out by him. Her family debates whether to allow her to work for him and she arrives at the outer court.

Maomao: view of herself

She believes she lost the bet because of her lack of skill, she tries hard to convince her parents to allow her to work for him, yet she tells them that it is to get information.

Maomao: view of Jinshi

She believes he is oblivious after spending a small fortune on her. 

Jinshi: view of himself

He accepts that he wants Maomao near him and uses the wager as a legitimate way to make that happen.

Jinshi: view of Maomao

He is openly attracted to her but also values her intellect and individuality.

Relationship development

Their relationship moves from palace assignment to personal choice. Jinshi chooses to employ Maomao when no political structure requires it.

Theme

Choice disguised as a wager.

Key development

Maomao joins Jinshi’s household and outer-court work.

Chapter 16 — A New Life in the Outer Court

Time

Beginning the next day and extending over several days.

Main plot

Maomao settles into Jinshi’s residence, secretly fills her room with medicinal supplies, begins investigating outer-court affairs, blackmails a servant involved with a married minister, and reconnects with military spaces and family contacts.

Maomao: view of herself

She enjoys the lower stakes of servant life but still uses Lady Kan’s skills whenever necessary.

Maomao: view of Jinshi

He becomes part of her routine. She expects his cases, his interruptions and his interest.

Jinshi: view of Maomao

He is attentive to her comfort, studies and living arrangements, attempting to make his household a place she can remain.

Relationship development

Domestic proximity begins. Their connection is built through repeated ordinary contact rather than only crises.

Theme

Building a life inside a disguise.

Key development

Maomao’s room and work establish a tangible identity separate from Lady Kan.

Chapter 17 — Court, Barracks and Investigation

Time

Several days or weeks into her outer-court employment.

Main plot

Maomao delivers documents, visits the barracks and accompanies Rikuson to investigate a suspicious household and possible poisoning.

Maomao: view of herself

She demonstrates that medical, political and military knowledge all belong to the same person, even if she still divides that person into identities.

Maomao: view of Jinshi

She misses his investigations when separated from him and wonders when he will give her another case.

Jinshi: view of Maomao

Likely sees her as increasingly indispensable, though much of this chapter appears Maomao-focused.

Relationship development

Even when working with Rikuson or Lihaku, Maomao’s thoughts return to Jinshi and the life she has built in his residence.

Theme

Competence across worlds.

Key development

Maomao’s court-life investigation contributes to the Minister Jian rumour.

Chapter 18 — Lady Kan and Minister Jian

Time

Several days after Chapter 17.

Main plot

Jinshi visits Lady Kan to investigate rumours surrounding Minister Jian. Lady Kan reveals that Jian once proposed marriage and then an illicit relationship, giving Jinshi evidence of his pattern of behaviour.

Maomao: view of herself

She strategically performs vulnerability but reveals a secret she has never shared. Rikuson’s earlier question intensifies her identity conflict.

Maomao: view of Jinshi

She is quietly bitter that he chose Lady Kan rather than Maomao, revealing that she wants to be trusted and selected in her own right.

Jinshi: view of Lady Kan

He respects her political intelligence and feels genuine sorrow at what she endured.

Jinshi: view of Maomao

He considers Maomao intelligent but mistakenly believes she lacks noble-court expertise.

Relationship development

An enormous hidden trust milestone: Maomao tells Jinshi the truth while he believes he is speaking to someone else.

Theme

Trust through the wrong identity.

Key development

Minister Jian is positioned for removal, and Lady Kan becomes involved in Jinshi’s political investigations.

Chapter 19 — How They See One Another

Time

Same evening and night as Chapter 18/A few days later.

Main plot

A dual-POV chapter reflects on Maomao and Jinshi’s growing trust. Maomao makes Jinshi medicine, while later Jinshi serves her tea and invites her to speak about her interests.

Maomao: view of herself

She sees herself as divided between Maomao and Lady Kan and believes her family loyalty will eventually force her to betray Jinshi.

Maomao: view of Jinshi

She recognises that he trusts her more, reveals his imperfect private self, and treats Maomao as a person rather than an object.

Maomao: key development

She begins believing that Jinshi might not destroy her if he discovered the truth.

Jinshi: view of himself

He sees his life before Maomao as duty, performance and unwanted attention. Around her, he feels more human.

Jinshi: view of Maomao

She is honest in her annoyance, brilliant, vulnerable beneath her stoicism, and someone whose health matters personally to him.

Jinshi: key development

He admits to himself that he deeply cares for her and wants ordinary closeness, not merely flirtation.

Relationship development

  • Maomao prepares medicine for him unprompted.
  • He drinks it without suspicion.
  • He serves her tea.
  • She allows gentle touch.
  • He says her importance is not lesser than his.
  • She talks freely about her hobbies.
  • They end the evening together without wanting it to end.

Theme

Trust and quiet intimacy.

Chapter 20 — A Lighter Morning

Time
The morning after Chapter 19.

Main plot

Maomao wakes genuinely rested after her evening with Jinshi, accompanies him back to the Rear Palace, reunites with Gyokuyou and the Jade Pavilion, continues investigating Jinshi's connection to Lady Kan, while Gyokuyou privately confronts Jinshi about his feelings for Maomao. Their peaceful visit is interrupted when a concubine collapses, launching into the next arc.

Maomao: view of herself

She chooses to remain Maomao for the day and acknowledges that becoming Lady Kan contributes to her exhaustion. She begins appreciating the quiet life she has built around Jinshi without constantly analysing it.

Maomao: view of Jinshi

She notices his gaze is neither hungry nor objectifying; he looks at her as a person. She enjoys teasing him, worries when he appears tired, and becomes increasingly curious about what he truly knows regarding Lady Kan.

Maomao: key development

She experiences what it feels like to simply exist rather than perform either identity. Even while investigating Jinshi herself, caring for him begins to come naturally.

Jinshi: view of himself

He finds himself forced to acknowledge his feelings for Maomao after Gyokuyou refuses to let him hide behind professionalism. He realises he sees Maomao as a person first and a capable apothecary second.

Jinshi: view of Maomao

He notices immediately that she looks healthier, enjoys their easy companionship, and begins consciously rejecting the habit of thinking of her merely as someone useful. He wants to protect her without restricting her freedom.

Relationship development

Breakfast together becomes a comfortable routine.
They joke and tease one another naturally.
Jinshi openly discusses Lady Kan with Maomao without realising who she truly is.
Gyokuyou forces Jinshi to confront his feelings.
Jinshi realises he wants Maomao's happiness, even if it means letting her leave.
They immediately fall back into working as partners when the poisoning case begins.

Theme

Comfort, honesty and choosing to see another person.

The Future 

This chapter establishes their healthiest emotional dynamic so far before introducing the next central mystery. Jinshi consciously accepts his feelings for Maomao, while the poisoned concubine case reconnects the story to the political intrigue of the Rear Palace while also leading into the next big arc.