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Summit

Summary:

I haven’t posted in a long while but I’m working on something huge!! It’s technically my 18th piece (pls refer to One-Shot Wonder for the explanation of my chronological writing timeline 🥺🙏) but I feel like this may genuinely be my first NON-one-shot which is REALLY EXCITING ‼️‼️🫪

Also our school blocked ao3 so i’m barely coming on here cus I’m conserving my data haha 😅😅

BUT YES HERE IS A POEM!! I wrote this poem because I had writer’s block for my current non-one-shot (im still on ep.1 tho 😑💔🥀also it may function as more of an episodic/serial/manga thing than a book thing because I uh I said so 😤😤) so I was like “ahh shii I have to write something!!” So I wrote this poem with a huge headache‼️‼️ i’m always writing when I have fevers and headaches, could it be a cause and effect or am i tweaking 🧐🧐

Please enjoy‼️‼️

(There are a lot of poetic devices and a huge amount of attention to detail, so if you love details (like me!🤗) please come back to ‘Summit’ when you feel like it; I promise you that there’s always something more to discover with this poem!! It’s like an endless onion 🧅…I love onions!! 🥺 the syllabic liberties I took are yearning to be recognised 🥹🥹🙏‼️)

Notes:

Um yes like I said in the summary, I wrote ‘Summit’ at like 2-3 am ish (i think) cus I just HAD to write 🫩💔🥀‼️ so this is utter rubbish but at the same time I played with the rhythm and the form and the language and although this is a relatively out-of-character poem, I think this might just be an extension of my style. So I really hope you like it‼️‼️🥺

(See the end of the work for more notes.)

Work Text:

Dancing, moles migrate across where thunder marks skin—
I tire and forget a sweet itch within;
I rest a full head of vines in soil.
By sunlight hours, these dots have found new homes
and
coat themselves in neat argyle, fat and oil
coat their backsides.

Backsides hanging out, hanging in
the square for folk to witness when
I slumber, they scurry
and
make much progress,
proceed with the slow-burn
crawl
on flesh that is harsh on grain
on twos then fours then fives then a main
number of pride
and
sadly, body.
Sadly body badly behaving.

Behaving can be quite the feat. The feet
be having raw malt for lovers; I, for
behaving, reward myself with the same kiss
a flower leaves behind on
a bumble bee’s behind on
work on
beehiving.
Find honey diving in your thirsty soul.

Soul-seek sought
foul-speak fought,
so be it a fowl’s beak caught.
So be it a nil to naught, a thrill to thwart an arm around a neck
with thought. With blood, with veins and reins around a deck
of cards with only aces,
of hooves with only races—
cloven kings neigh steam from faces
woven, rings weigh less than air expelled in traces
through an old bull and his older, solder lungs.

Lungs fill while crops grow heavy.
Lug hills while hilltops grow further, heavy
luggage kills while kill-shots grow into murder, heavy
luxury wills while will-nots grow on us,
honest,
lying in hay in heap in lust.

Lust but not last but not least,
lest clay gives dust and ash to yeast, a thick loaf
rises.
Surprises frost and frosting against the scalp of winter—
slices thinner and silver thinning down
against a knitted nightgown,
against a borrowed brown
crust of a cold crown
of folded frown
of the town
you dream
of.

Notes:

Yes instead of doing my English literature homework, I wrote ‘Summit’. My poetry teacher really liked it so YOU BETTER LIKE IT TOO 🔥🔥🥊 grr 😠 jk poetry is entirely subjective and I’m very grateful that you sat through it and made it to the end‼️‼️ THANK YOU SO MUCH ☺️‼️🤗

If anyone wants any interpretations or wishes for some parts/certain lines/metaphors to be explained, please just leave a little comment down below‼️ I’d love to explore it with you!! 🥺

Again, thank you so so much!! 🙏❤️❤️ please look forward to reading more of the farts and poops I churn out!! 😊😊 THANK YOU 🥹🙏❤️!!! Meanwhile, feel free to browse some more of my work!! If you like poetry, the second chapter of One-Shot Wonder is definitely for you. If you’d like to see some prose, I have quite a few of those too, and I’m planning to add more soon!!

Thank you!! 🥺🥺❤️‼️‼️🙏 Have a lovely day/night ☺️🫂💖!!