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16/10/2021 - Rewrote a few lines, changed some grammar. It does not change the story, just rewords things to be clearer and flow better.
16/10/2021 - Rewrote a few lines, changed some grammar. It does not change the story, just rewords things to be clearer and flow better.
My intention with this was to create motivations for Breen, more than just "for the evuls". I wanted to write a character who really thinks he's the hero, who believes what he is peddling, who thinks he really is saving humanity.
I hope I conveyed that.
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