aa how does this not have any comments yet !! super sweet, there's this sort of floatiness (? or "drifty" feeling, not sure if i'm describing it right) that fits really well, especially from suo's pov. speaking of suo, his characterisation here is really good ! his feelings.. theyre simultaneously viseral and vague, and the almost-knowing of them contributes to his struggle to express them,,, also will ofc always be a fan of hopeful endings. very wind breaker
You picked up what I was trying to put down and that makes me very happy. I try to write in ways that make it feel dream-like or drifting through time, so I always appreciate when people pick up on it!
I was worried that I made Suo too ooc here, so I’m glad you feel that way^^ Hopeful endings are my favorite, though I do consider making ambiguous ones from time to time heh. Tysm for reading!
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