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  1. A137 on Chapter 17 Sat 04 Oct 2025 06:31PM UTC

    This was an interesting chapter, poor Eve (and Wally).
    Some criticism I want to give though, imo I feel like Soap immediately thinking that *Roach*, someone with absolutely no shown knowledge in leadership (at least any being shown to the Axion crew), being considered to be a good leader just doesn't make sense, and admittedly makes Roach a bit too.....I don't want to say a Mary Sue, but sucked off by the fic so to say (no offence). Especially when Soap himself definitely has leadership experience (and a good deal of it at that) when compared to whatever Roach might have (I assume squad level leadership). If anything I figure he'd get Wally and Roach as advisors when/if the Axiom ever got back to earth, since they both (to the Axiom crew) seem to have lived their whole lives on it and would be much more experienced than anyone from the Axiom would be, bar any other recon probes like Eve sent to Earth.
    I hope this doesn't sound rude

    And about artists, could look into commissioning some? They don't have to be WALL-E artists, they just need to know how to draw them correctly and be willing to *draw* WALL-E stuff in the first place, and considering the robots have been turned human, their design shouldn't be that hard to draw. The issue would be more them being willing to draw it in the first place.

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    1. TheAbyss2005 on Chapter 17 Sat 04 Oct 2025 06:45PM UTC

      Meh, I appreciate the criticism, but many errors are often made by us fans when writing a fanfiction.

      We're probably the least qualified, and very few bangers (both in grammar and content) have released over the years.
      I think my story is decent at best. And, again, it's a deconstruction of the trope.

      Btw, if you knew what I had in mind for Gary and the story's ending, you wouldn't say he was a Mary Sue.
      Trust me, everything will not end with a happy ending, unlike the movie. At best, it'll be bittersweet.

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      1. A137 on Chapter 17 Sat 04 Oct 2025 08:46PM UTC

        >and very few bangers (both in grammar and content) have released over the years.
        For WALL-E fanfiction or as a whole? Because while I've seen some poor writers, I've also seem some very good writers and fics, too.
        >Trust me, everything will not end with a happy ending, unlike the movie. At best, it'll be bittersweet.
        Might not be a good idea to spoil that, man.
        >but many errors are often made by us fans when writing a fanfiction.
        Still, good to have stuff pointed out.

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        1. TheAbyss2005 on Chapter 17 Sat 04 Oct 2025 09:10PM UTC

          Ehhh, this is very inspired by another fanfiction, which is on fanfiction.net
          If you read that, you'll get an idea of where this is going.

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          1. A137 on Chapter 17 Sat 04 Oct 2025 11:54PM UTC

            WALLY: The Novelization? Might be a good idea to link exactly what it is tbh. I admit, I'm curious.

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            1. TheAbyss2005 on Chapter 17 Sun 05 Oct 2025 06:21AM UTC

              Just search: "Wally the Novelization, Humanized!" on Google.
              It's also on fanfiction.net

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      3. spidermanfan03 on Chapter 17 Sat 04 Oct 2025 08:54PM UTC

        > Trust me, everything will not end with a happy ending, unlike the movie. At best, it'll be bittersweet.

        I’m not quite sure if that’s a good idea to say that since it does seem like a spoiler. Given the fact that the movie and the Wall-E humanized fanfic that you were inspired to write both had good endings, seems like Gary is gonna die at the end or at least something bad will happen to Gary.

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        1. TheAbyss2005 on Chapter 17 Sat 04 Oct 2025 09:11PM UTC

          Nah, no spoilers, my friend.

          We both read the Novelization, so we both know where this is going. I'm just here to break the fourth wall and use Gary to point out and adjust those errors.

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          1. spidermanfan03 on Chapter 17 Sat 04 Oct 2025 10:47PM UTC

            Alright then, and yeah I think I know what's gonna happen in the next chapter. Since in the Novelization, Eve was trying to get Wally home but he doesn't want to go, and she yelled at Wally and was pissed off because she thought he stole the plant along other reasons. And At one point, Eve was about to kill Wally and end him off right there until she was calmed down after what Wally told her.

            Now, back when I first read it, I didn't knew how bad it was for the first time because I was enjoying reading the fanfic. But reading it again made me realize that how controversial it was when Eve did that to Wally.

            Now granted, it doesn't take me away from liking the fanfic. I still like it to this day, it's just that the way Eve behaves to Wally from that part in my opinion. So im gonna guess that maybe either this won't happen in your fanfic, or maybe it will but Gary would call her out on her behavior for what she did.

            Although if its considered to be spoilers and you don't want to tell me, that's totally fine.

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