Read this beauty again as "part two" was published and it's brilliant. Your characterizations and their thoughts are brilliant and your depiction of what could/would have happened after they returned between Scarif and the destruction of Alderaan is IMHO perfect. :)
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NewLeeland on Chapter 12 Wed 29 Mar 2017 03:23PM UTC
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Felurian on Chapter 12 Wed 29 Mar 2017 05:10PM UTC
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