Late comment but I just saw some stuff that didn't sit right with me. I like you fanfic a lot so far and planning on to read to 7th chapter, and wait for more. But my problem is ooc and not lore accurate "dawn". First of all Stella is very testy and hasty unlike canonically Stella, her character is not that of explosive when there is something they as trailblazer don't like. That just brief and short explanation why that is ooc. And second of all Okhema doesn't have normal day/night time because of titan who hold light source for them what is mentioned in first visit in Okhema the Holy city.
But overall this fanfiction is good on their overcome of hard situation, and that unique experience for them and they both feel not comfortable to be shipped by public.
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syadnus on Chapter 2 Tue 07 Oct 2025 06:53AM UTC
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