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  1. Merefis18 on Chapter 6 Sun 19 Oct 2025 01:45AM UTC

    YAY!! You’ve returned with a such a banger girly, this was so good and sweet!!

    First of all: Lyana POV?? In this economy?? That’s more unlikely than you’d think, my friend. I actually just did a lyana pov for my fic and I loved it, so I was so interested to see what you’d do with her and you didn’t disappoint! She’s so precious and loving, and overall she’s got such a soft, quiet aura to her that I think contrasts nicely with omega’s bright volume. Her interacting with the boys was wonderful too; I always love when she’s written as though she’s another little sister to them. She deserves all the big brother figures, too 🥰

    oh and may I just say, her friendship with omega is everything? they’re so innocent and tender here! talking like girls do about boys and life, ugh I wish we could’ve seen more of them like this in the show proper!

    oh, and omega and crosshair. the salty-sweet duo. the little hug crosshair initiates after they’ve done their reading of each other…gah! it’s so good! they’ve both grown so much!

    I’m sure omega will get through to cal, though I understand her hesitation. she’s had a pretty great track record with helping to heal traumatized friends and family in the past ;)

    another amazing chapter my friend, you have no idea how much I enjoy this story! it’s definitely a comfort read! :))

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    1. r_chess on Chapter 6 Mon 20 Oct 2025 04:56PM UTC

      Thank you!! I am glad you feel that it’s a good returning chapter!

      Lyana pov is rare for sure! But I’m glad to hear that you feel I was doing right by her! And writing her interactions with the boys was so much fun! I just know they let her crash at their place all the time and Shep is 100% okay with that.

      Yes it was so important to me that Omega and Lyana have some sweet moments together! I also wish there was more of that in the show, because they both loved it in canon!

      They are the salty sweet duo for sure! You know Crosshair was just stewing in his room the whole time before Omega came to check on him. They care so much about each other!

      Omega is very good at reaching others, and it’s going to take the two of them working together to get where they need to be!

      Thank you for your kind words, friend! They mean a lot!

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