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  1. MissingTime on Chapter 6 Fri 07 Apr 2017 05:31PM UTC

    Lol, yeah, in Removed (my MLP story) my original idea was to make it a story about overcoming grief by having Starlight raise Celestia's baby well after she dies during childbirth. Sadly, the story ended up being about Starlight removing Celestia's skin and sewing it onto her child in an effort to replace her lover after her death due to insanity caused by grief. In my original idea there would have been a chapter where the baby scrapes her knee and Starlight gives her a get-better-kiss.

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    1. MonstrousAffections on Chapter 6 Fri 07 Apr 2017 11:07PM UTC

      ...... O-O...... ok

      pffft sorry about that heheh

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      1. MissingTime on Chapter 6 Sat 08 Apr 2017 03:32AM UTC

        Lol, no need to apologize.

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        1. MonstrousAffections on Chapter 6 Sat 08 Apr 2017 05:10AM UTC

          ahahahaha good XD

          that was pretty creepy though :) and this is coming from a girl who also writes some pretty creepy stuff hehehe

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          1. MissingTime on Chapter 6 Sat 08 Apr 2017 07:35AM UTC

            Lol, yeah...I kind of started out dark and then just tried to see how dark I could get with the story.

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            1. MonstrousAffections on Chapter 6 Sat 08 Apr 2017 08:21AM UTC

              ahaha, nice XD

              that's kinda the same thing that's happening with Black Passion that is if you don't mind spoilers hehehe

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              1. MissingTime on Chapter 6 Mon 10 Apr 2017 04:50AM UTC

                I don't mind spoilers very much, unless it's something big and important.

                By the way, when do you think you'll update that story? I think I'd like to get into it, but there's too little story right now.

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                1. MonstrousAffections on Chapter 6 Mon 10 Apr 2017 06:46AM UTC

                  hehehe, well the spoiler won't be too big, just a tiny clue, and that is vampires are well known for being possessive/protective ;)

                  I would have liked to update sooner, but we're packing up preparing to move at the moment so It'll probably be after that, but don't worry, you'll know when it's updated hehehe

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