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  1. Endothermic_Archer on Chapter 1 Wed 29 Oct 2025 03:45AM UTC

    omg i love this and thank you for writting this
    cuz geniuely that whole arc pissed me tf off like, janes gonna leave and then say he would have come back when he didnt and ignore all of lisbons calls like Yell at him lisbon girl you too good for this like
    and then when jane is like we cant all solider on like you im like we gotta like address this right at some point and then they didnt and im still mad about it.
    like i get it jane the main character ut like they never really deal with how shit jane as like put lisbon through personally and like onknowingly. Like i love them but yet cmon imma gonna stop before i start ranting in the comment section lolol

    so anyways i love this and i already got tears in my eyes, im so ready for when they have like a bigger converstion and im so glad that lisbon is being pissed. you have the the voices down really good, as alwaysand i really like the relationship with lisbon and cho, which is always a highlight in any form but the mutaul loyalty and respect is so clear. like of course lisbon only told cho,
    you also have lisbon and jane down really well. i like that here janes isnt as smart as he thinks he is and all his like tools are failing him so they actaully have to talk and like express their feeling with words

    also janes inetrnal monlogue while being higly depressing is also so so funny like "he wants suddenly to go to the ocean and drown himself" made me laugh out loud

    also yay fisher! Yay minelli!

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    1. light_loves_the_dark on Chapter 1 Thu 30 Oct 2025 01:32AM UTC

      omg yay thank you!! and same - i reallly needed more of it. you can't just leave it there!! jane eventually crashing out makes sense, but lisbon not calling him tf out for it does NOT check out. this is the same woman with the "i am not your girlfriend i'm an officer of the law" energy lol

      i need like 50% more energy put into lisbon's character development post 6x08. it would've added so much 😭

      the bigger conversation is coming! this was the fight - they got their feelings out, and now they have to figure it out. i'm so glad you feel like jane and lisbon (and cho) are accurate, and i hope you feel like that continues in the next chapter <3

      and lmaoo he's so dramatic. like yes he's angry at himself but he's also a drama queen about it. i love him.

      and yay fisher!! and minelli my absolute fav i would kill for him.

      thank you for the lovely comment!! <3

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