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  1. BlueMountainFairy on Chapter 23 Mon 03 Nov 2025 01:46PM UTC

    I was just thinking about this fic and then there it was on the first page of the tag established ice and Maverick. Of course I had to reread the whole thing, and it was just as good as I remember it to be.

    Loved the scene of Bradley getting his memories back. I can't wait for the whole family to be back. There will be so much 🌟drama🌟. Also, nobody will know how to act. Bradley will be bitchy about the papers but also like oh my parents still love me (or whatever reason you make Bradley think they pulled the papers). Ice and Pete will have gotten back into the swing of parenting but not sure if it's wanted. Jake is going to cry. Jerry is going to swear off family functions for two years and hide with the penguins.

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    1. tinyblueberry on Chapter 23 Mon 03 Nov 2025 04:18PM UTC

      Ohhhhh I feel almost like famous person commented here, because I saw your crossover fanfiction before around, even if I didn't read them since I don't know shit about 911, expect for the fact that you guys are mad because they killed your favorite father figure xDD

      Honestly even I feel imitated by potential drama family, because I know how I want to end this, like I literally have some sort of epilogue written and potential for sequel in my head, but I'm not sure how to bite this confrontation yet, without going overboard and traumatizing Jake too much since I feel like I should give him a break finally 🤣
      Like I definitely will be finally including other POV's for his sake, so he won't have to be in the middle of this drama more then he already was XD

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      1. BlueMountainFairy on Chapter 23 Tue 04 Nov 2025 02:04AM UTC

        Awe shucks 😊. I'll tell you a little secret, I've only seen like two seasons of 911. I've just read a crap ton of fanfiction. Even so, you could probably read Evan Mitchell-Kazansky, as it requires very little information on 911. Crossovers are the gateway to new fandoms.

        Poor Jake does need a break, or he's never going to beat the crybaby allegations. I feel like Bradley's POV would be the best plot-wise or thematically or whatever, but would also be one of the hardest to write. Jerry's POV would also be super interesting and might help push the story. Of course, Ice and Mav are also an option. I just think, as a writer, it would be hard to write unless you already have the confrontation planned out in your head, if not on paper.

        It's always the hardest when you have point A written and point C planned out, but have no clue what to do about point B. I hope my comment helps I love helping people brainstorm and untangle their thoughts.

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        1. tinyblueberry on Chapter 23 Tue 04 Nov 2025 07:36AM UTC

          "Crossovers are the gateway to new fandoms."
          Honestly that's what I'm afraid of 🤣🤣🤣
          I'm considering watching 911 tho after I'll finish with Fire country, since it put me in pro fire fighters mood 😂

          Yeah, I know Brad POV would make most sense, but it would be so hard, I'm not sure I'm up to it 😔so I'm probably going to go with Mav's, tho I haven't even considered that I could use Jerry's POV as sort of outsider POV in a way 🤔🤔🤔

          Yeah you did help, thank you ❤️ since now I might end up using Jerry's POV for next chapter since I think it could be easiest in a way 🤣

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          1. BlueMountainFairy on Chapter 23 Thu 06 Nov 2025 02:04AM UTC

            I'll be honest I typically only watch enough of a show to get a basis to read fanfiction or understand the fandom or until it gets too weird or the writing starts to not make sense.

            I'm glad to have helped. I super struggle to write the emotionally constipated overwhelmed with life and emotions character povs, so yeah, I don't envy you writing Bradley's pov. I would totally be down for Jerry's pov. It would be kind of funny actually because he barely knows what is going on. There is so much opportunity for humor or angst. Also, Jerry is a scientist he is probably good a t making observations and everyone is going to be keyed up and wearing their hearts on their sleeves.

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            1. tinyblueberry on Chapter 23 Thu 06 Nov 2025 10:35AM UTC

              Oh, actually I'm the same with stopping watching once writing starts to get bad! I've probably abandoned more series mid-watch than I've finished! 😂

              "Jerry is a scientist he is probably good a t making observations and everyone is going to be keyed up and wearing their hearts on their sleeves." reading this after already writing his POV where he's just as much of dumbass as rest of them, I feel embarrassed a little 🤣🤣🤣 BUT in my defense irl I know people with kind of pseudo-scientific works that require strong thinking, but it doesn't change the fact that in their private lives they can be stupid xDDDD

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