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  1. Bluebell (Guest) on Chapter 18 Sun 09 Nov 2025 01:46AM UTC

    Look at Percy, finally becoming a dolphin, him and sally getting a huge settlement from Yancy, having a great time with his family and friends, having a wonderful time at camp, living his best life… and then Luke came in

    This was a fantastic chapter and it was so great seeing Luke’s POV and just how the madness made him even more violent and that Castor and Pollux ended up saving Percy at the end
    Also, I know I’m probably overthinking it but I love the fact that, out of all the characters who’ve tried the grape juice, Luke’s the only one who just outright hates it

    The fact that he had a flicker of hope that Percy, had Luke possibly gone about this a different way, could’ve possibly cured May of her insanity, has decimated me

    This was sunshine a wonderful fic and I’m so excited on how you’ll do the next installment!^^

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    1. BlueCartoons on Chapter 18 Sun 09 Nov 2025 04:48AM UTC

      Percy was living his best life then Luke happened 😔 At least he got to be a dolphin

      I'm happy that I depicted a madness-affected Luke properly. I wanted the madness to amplify his anger and emotions but not go completely crazy, at least not yet. Like cracking something that already had a few cracks

      I was thinking about Annabeth coming in to see the entire thing like the show but Castor and Pollux felt more appropriate since they were there when Percy came to camp.

      Even though Luke has a very hateful view of madness considering what his mom went through, he couldn't help but hope either way. It's something that I want to explore in the future

      Thank you for commenting! 💜 💙 I'm like this with your comments

      Last Edited Sun 09 Nov 2025 04:49AM UTC

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