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  1. passer_domesticus on Chapter 12 Wed 12 Nov 2025 10:00AM UTC

    Man, I've read this whole story in one go. I'd like to think this is how it would have gone in a no crash AU-perhaps a gentler one. There is something so delicate and soothing about your writing, kinda like getting a pat on the head with a ''there there, it's gonna be all better now.''
    Loved how Shauna was here-how vulnerable and honest she is threw her writing, how you can feel that this is here comfort zone, that she can articulate better. Last chapter broke my heart.
    Loved how Jackie switched once she got the confirmation of love and she needed- going back to I'm obsessed and big declarations. I'll let you lead-then straight to I'm throwing you a party-I could really feel the buzzing there.
    Wonder how this will continue once phones are back in. Can't wait to see what's next! Thank you for sharing your writing!

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    1. RavenclawSometimes on Chapter 12 Sun 16 Nov 2025 04:22AM UTC

      Thanks for the lovely comment. The phones will not be in for a long, long time, which is the real challenge for me because I have to keep it interesting this way. I have a few things planned. Let's see how it pans out. Thanks again.

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