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  1. monikemedeiros on Chapter 5 Wed 12 Nov 2025 07:33PM UTC

    Sometimes I forget what Neji's personality was like in the classic series. Is he everything he thinks he is? Yes—and maybe even a little more! But let's be honest, his arrogance sometimes irritated me, as did some moments you'll read about here, haha. Despite that, compared to other encounters, this one was even more respectful. But then... "You're going to be my obedient wife, aren't you?"—and that was it, the mood was ruined! At the time, I just thought: "We were in 2025, but in a matter of seconds we went back to the 1500s?"

    I don't see the protagonist as someone rebellious or who doesn't listen to others, but rather as a free person. But let's be honest: few women nowadays have the idea of ​​"being obedient to a man" in their heads because of the various problems that this idea entails, and the protagonist, who has a freer side—and I'm not talking about her sex life—I believe she wouldn't be part of that small group that accepts that. If he was serious, the ending would be predictable even before it began. And honestly, even if the sex was good, the date didn't meet her expectations—in her search for true love. Of course, a single date doesn't provide all the answers, but the famous "warning signs" had already started to appear.

    Now, I have to say: I've read hundreds of fanfics in my life and I've seen everything when it comes to using Uchiha eyes in steamy scenes... but I've never seen anything like this with the Hyuuga! When his eyes activated, I was simply in shock—it was incredible! I think I've never been so "Team Hyuuga" as at that moment. What a wonderful power! As impulsive and full of warning signs as he was, tonight, in bed, the stage was all his. (A toast to the chakra that exists at the G-spot!)

    Serena shares the same neurons as my brothers because, as the only "daughter who hasn't married yet," in their minds I carry the divine mission of saving the family... by marrying someone rich who will finance her travels and luxuries. Honestly, it would be easier for me to sell them and get rich once and for all than to find someone to marry. After all, my love life is practically nonexistent—an urban legend that's the butt of jokes and told at family dinners.

    Thank you for the chapter, author!

    Last Edited Wed 12 Nov 2025 07:36PM UTC

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    1. MizzGinger on Chapter 5 Thu 13 Nov 2025 03:30PM UTC

      Yeah, Neji has always had an arrogance to him, very stuffy, and quite the traditional man. He has his good qualities, but I'm glad you took seriously what he said. It gives major insight to what we are going to experience with Neji.

      100000000000000000000000%%%%% YES. This protagonist is extremely free in terms of her spirit. She's a ball of joy, happy to be herself, and not afraid of embarrassment. Definitely not a rebellious person, but those who want to cage her interpret her actions as rebellious when she's just a free spirit. So what Neji demands of her, of course she says accepts it (jokingly) cause she wants good sex... but I promise you, she sees the signs. She just has her rose-tinted glasses on because of the thing he did in bed LMAO

      HAHA! Right? I've been trying to make each sexual encounter a different one based on clan attributes. //i sometimes laugh that i use my free time to just brainstorm on sexual attributes for this story... BUT, I have fun doing it and that's what matters.

      Wow, that's a heavy burden to have with your family. And that sucks, it's extremely normal to not have a love life until your mid twenties and now thirties, like more normal than people think :c //pat pat .... legit dumb that they think that way... when you get rich, no luxuries for them >:c

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