I love this - you have lovely prose and so easily immersed me into Tony's world and his feelings. I felt very sympathetic to his conflict, because while I adore the unrequited love trope, it is very painful for the character going through it! He's so wonderful though and so protective of and caring towards Clay, it makes me weep. I'm really looking forward to reading the second chapter. :)
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Thu 20
Apr 201705:33AM UTC
Thank you so much for your comment! It means the world to me! Unrequited love tends to be so bittersweet and I'm reallh happy I could really capture that in writing :) Tony is honestly a character I feel deeply connected to. Next chapter will probably be up by Sunday!
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