Vernon wasn't mentioned as getting a wand.
The conversations feel stilted, jagged, inhuman in a way that I cannot pinpoint.
The way the sentences are structured makes it feel disingenuous.
Hopefully that gets cleared up. The premise of this fic is interesting, at the very least.
Why would Vernon get a wand?
And which conversation do you mean?
which sentemces?
it is only my second story, so im doing my best also im not native english speaking, i dont know if thats why you get the feeling?
i hope you find your answers as we move forward
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