Holy shit this was incredibly effective writing... like the absolute NUMBNESS and emptiness of this is so constant. Michael really is the only positive in this entire chapter since it seems something about the party finally made him snap and start to really care about Evan. But Evan holy shit the poor kid, he is so young and dealing with SO MUCH. The part where he said Freddy, Bonnie, Chica, and Foxy were not Gabriel, Jeremy, Susie, and Fritz... sjdksjjdjss sometimes the most direct references hit rhe hardest
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