Comment on In Between What Might Have Been and What Has Come to Pass

  1. Village_Mystic on Chapter 4 Thu 04 Dec 2025 10:32AM UTC

    Thank you for your kind response. I tried really hard to allow for some wiggle room, and didn't mention a few things for artistic interpretation. You were kind of close on a lot of stuff. That's why I tried to include compliments, and specifically say what bothered me based on personal experience - as opposed to objectively.

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    1. jangnangi on Chapter 4 Thu 04 Dec 2025 04:57PM UTC

      frieren

      And I appreciate that about you! If I came off defensive it wasn’t intentional, I just like to explain myself :)

      I am going to change Midtown to Manhattan at least, that won’t affect the story but at least fixes *that* mistake lol

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