Comment on Hope dies first, love stands last

  1. Starrydoodles Fri 05 Dec 2025 05:10AM UTC

    Wow, this was so pretty

    You wrote Leo's pain beautifully, it's almost like I can feel it myself

    The seven and the 2 other people just forgetting about him? The camps just forgetting about him? It was perfect

    The spelling erros made me smile, but the letters themselves made me wanna cry, makes me wanna see how Leo's friends and the rest of camp react to them and such

    And even tho this is sad, I can still Leo's humor shining through at the beginning, with the lot if inches and not a lot of inches

    Hope truly does die first, and love stands last

    I think that's true, you can lose all hope in someone but your heart will ache for them for a while longer

    :)

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    1. AykanWritin Fri 05 Dec 2025 07:30AM UTC

      Thanks a lot <3

      I juts wrote what I thought would've happened if Leo came back before TOA. People taught me that when we miss something/someone, we love them, but when they're here, we neglect and forget them. It's what people would do to Leo, I think.
      And I'm really happy you liked the joke bc I'm not a really funny person. It took me like 3 days to find a joke to put in thos oneshot TT

      I'm glad you liked it !
      And I also really like your works, I couldn't tell you because I didn't have an account, but I do now and I really really love you fics <3

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      1. Starrydoodles Fri 05 Dec 2025 01:53PM UTC

        Ofcourse :D

        And thank you :)

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        1. AykanWritin Fri 05 Dec 2025 07:03PM UTC

          Thank YOU <3

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          1. Starrydoodles Fri 05 Dec 2025 08:09PM UTC

            <3

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            1. AykanWritin Fri 05 Dec 2025 08:26PM UTC

              <3
              <333

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