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  1. Nemo193 on Chapter 1 Thu 04 May 2017 11:14AM UTC

    ~"Hey, on the job, it's Officer Shaw, sir," he snapped, without any malice.

    "No, I'm a woman, and I'm Officer Peck."~

    This scene cracks me up every time. I love their relationship a lot it's ... I don't know. It already feels like oliver is kinda taking over the parents role for gail (and the other rookies). It is also a great way to start off the story. It sets a great tone.

    I also loved holly starting to babble (even via text message) but being able to stop herself and answer non-rambly.

    The whole : it's not an allergy, it's a sensitivity thing is amazing. Especially when you remember the incident later on . Cause it actually is an allergy, isn't it?

    Holly saving gail was also so in canon, that I had to think if it was in the show or not.

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    1. ChapstickLez on Chapter 1 Sun 07 May 2017 01:54AM UTC

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      Back in chapter one, Holly didn't know it was an allergy. She does now, but back then she thought Gail was exaggerating.

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