This is a fantastic story. Not only do you have the nuances of the Stargate world and characters down, but you build a fascinating and compelling story. It's never too obvious what's going to happen next, which makes for a compelling narrative. Well-written and emotional and just great. I really enjoyed this and will be bookmarking it for re-reads. Thanks for a great read!
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kathryne on Chapter 18 Sun 08 Jul 2012 06:14PM UTC
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