(I retract everything about wanting to know more about Eliese's motives and character arc. Banish the witch! Boot her off to hell! Have Agathe duel magic with her and turn her into a toad!)
Aaaaanyway, you weren't kidding when you say that this would be a rough chapter to read (and to write, too, I'd imagine). Despite all the heartbreak you've wrought Belle and your readers, you've done a wonderful job conveying the depths of Adam's change in character and the pain that Belle feels when she decides to give up on her relationship with Adam. (I'm nervous af because you still have 5 chapters with which to torture us, but I'm sure they'll be masterfully drafted). I can't wait to see the further progression of this story and how the characters may go about making things right again. Extra kudos!
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morningstar95 on Chapter 6 Sat 20 May 2017 09:15PM UTC
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