Comment on A Warrior, a Thief, and Dragon Teeth

  1. imsodead on Chapter 1 Mon 10 Jul 2017 05:57PM UTC

    aaaaaaaaaa i loved this!!! this seems so interesting and i loved the way you did the descriptions and the characterization and the interactions of the two!!!! i love how kiri's determination and bright attitude is still there and i really love the idea of warrior!bakugo!!!! also, i really loved the first bit, i loved the flow and the descriptions!!! the descriptions were really great and aaaaaaa i can really imagine everything playing out and all aaaaaaaaaa

    “I know exactly how many dragons you killed to get those,” the thief snapped

    and really, this line intrigued me because how did he even know??? it's like there's more to kirishima than just being some plain thief and aaaaa this got me curious, especially the last bit. idk but to me, it seems like kiri has some underlying motive that's driving him to steal the teeth or maybe it's just because they're probs expensive but really i have no idea and aaaaa this is getting me more curious and i can't stop thinking about it (but then again, what if kiri's just a fanboy)
    but really, this is great enough as is but it can also be like a wonderful start to a bigger story and adventure!!! if you ever continue this, i'd love to read more of their interactions and adventure aaaaaaaaaaaaa (i'm sorry i can't seem to put what i want to say into words??? like my mind's just screaming because i loved this and??? idk this is just great and i wanted to point out everything i loved abt this but how to form sentences or smth??? aaaaaaaaa)

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    1. All_My_Characters_Are_Dead on Chapter 1 Tue 11 Jul 2017 11:39PM UTC

      Thank you!

      I'm so happy you picked up on that line! It's definitely an important hint for Kiri's character.

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