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1. jargonelle Sat 26 Dec 2009 09:37AM UTC

   

   Wow, this is so vivid - I love how sensual it is, how all of the touches and tastes and smells are important - and how everything Sean says is so compelling and seductive, how he is 'taking care of the words' and guh, '"There was something so overwhelming, always, about the fact that even with the flash and glamour and skill and sheer bloody force that was Mickey around, Sean looked at him.' and no wonder Ash kisses him back after all of that. Whew.

   And the collision motif is perfect for Ash and for tying everything together. This is amazing. *hearts*

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2. 1. halotolerant Fri 01 Jan 2010 09:15PM UTC

      

      Thank you! I'm so pleased that this fic worked for you! Many thanks for commenting.

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