You packed a lot of plot in a small amount of words in this fic, which is a good thing. A N7 trainer at Rio is an interesting place to take Shepard- I liked that it was multi species, which puts humanity in an interesting place on the political map. You've done some things in the world that I would never think of doing either- Victus being a a bit of a dick, Tevos being, well, nice, Hackett being obtuse; post War, the universe is far more fucked in a Destroy ending, and everyone is going to start fighting for scraps.
When this finished and the Shadow Broker was the review, I chuffed in annoyance that there was no more. YES BUT WHAT DOES LIARA KNOW? TELLLLLL ME.
Aside: the little morsels of fluff/character development along with the politics and intrigue are delightful, and always like writers who balance this. Too much and it gets sickly!
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Soignee on Chapter 12 Mon 04 Sep 2017 03:58PM UTC
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