also, i forgot to mention in my other comment because i am..... so tired (rip me)
i really dig the dark tone you took with this fic. like considering how downright scary it would be for killua to suddenly feel weak given the whole 'if you can't win, run' thing illumi (literally!) put in his mind. and the needle scenes.... where he's struggling against it again is just like..... damn........ why u make my boy suffer???? nah its g i wouldn't be a big hxh fan if i didn't like my fiction incredibly painful but like..... wow ........ just pls tell me gon and killua will eventually be friends in this fic. i mean,,,, not like you can really say 'no' to gon, especially early hxh gon...... but like............. gon and killua are soulmates...........they have to know eachother..... change eachother.........
i'll shut up now im sorry i've been rewatching hxh and im on the chimera ant arc so im like super susceptible to this rn. i promise a slightly more comprehensive comment next chapter but like.........argh. i no word good rn.
Okay I feel as if I should probably take more time and make a proper response to this comment but honestly??? I'm so thankful for your tired ramblings like seeing this comment has got me super excited and I,,,love the fact that you took the time to leave it despite some exhaustion?? This is p much the highest compliment I could get as an author and just,, thank you so much my dude.
Also, there's so much planned for killua and gon!! We all know that he's pretty much irresistible, so whether killua likes it or not, they're fated to collide. But we must have patience-- it all happens a bit more roundabout this time, and there's some delicious angst between here and there.
ahhhh! im v excite for the next chapter..... and im so glad for endgame gon and killua being friends again!!! like, i knew killua wouldn't be able to keep his resolve to stay away for long (esp in the face of gon's determined niceness) but like...... as far as im concerned gon and killua are basically soulmates.... no matter what life they live, they always meet and change each other and grow together.....
i've made myself emotional about hxh again so im gonna stop there
but im glad my tired ramblings made you feel shit, cause ur writing made me feel shit, so now we're even, motherfucker. (not feel LIKE shit, but feel SHIT... v important difference, imo)
srsly tho, i'm really excited to see where you go with this fic.
happy writing, i guess?
happy living????
um, insert general well wishes about your health and wellbeing here.
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