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  1. Ninjy on Chapter 16 Sun 01 Oct 2017 09:29AM UTC

    OH THANK GOD, V DIDN'T LET ANY SHIT SLIDE. MEIJEONG IS SUPER THE BEST FOR STRAIGHT UP SAYING "EVEN IF YOU SAY THE BUILDING IS SAFE, I DON'T FEEL SAFE WITH -YOU-"
    MY WHOLE BODY IS TREMBLING WITH RELIEF
    ALSO BECAUSE IT'S 5:30AM AND I DIDNT SLEEP

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    1. goosewithajob on Chapter 16 Sun 01 Oct 2017 04:49PM UTC

      NOOOO SLEEP IS IMPORTANT YOU NEED TO SLEEP.

      But yeah, Meijeong and V talking to Jumin here gave me a lot of trouble because it's the point in this story most different than the route proper- Meijeong's not in love with Jumin, and so the conversation needed to be simultaneously very different and also sort of the same. V's route kind of helped me find the right tone and voice for it, because it helped sort of see more about what would have been going through V's head during the conversation.

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      1. Ninjy on Chapter 16 Sun 01 Oct 2017 06:21PM UTC

        it's ok i passed out at 6:30am for four hours and then ate a donut
        Luckily, the Mystic Messenger Guide I use has started working on the V route, so it won't be too long until I'll be playing it too!!! (FIRST STOP, RAY ENDS-//shot)

        Have you read Jumin's Queen? It's a pretty good stab at the Jumin Route, and it looks like the Reader is going to just kick Jumin's ass if he pulls that shit on her. MC is there too but she's a dick and I don't like her.

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        1. goosewithajob on Chapter 16 Sun 01 Oct 2017 10:37PM UTC

          So it's actually pretty rare that I read MMFic that isn't one shots or like, complete utter AUs (there was a fantasy setting AU that I loved to death but it stopped updating and I'm heartbroken T_T ) But I will look into that one since you recommended it.

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          1. Ninjy on Chapter 16 Mon 02 Oct 2017 02:26AM UTC

            I think I know what fantasty AU you're talking about. It's in my queque to read... rip that it doesn't update.

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        3. goosewithajob on Chapter 16 Sun 01 Oct 2017 10:43PM UTC

          Also, speaking of V route, it hasn't changed anything in the story much EXCEPT it did help solve a plot hole related to this chapter and the next that I was just gonna handwave away to make things work for my story. But now there's a legit reason I can make things work and I'm just... yesssss ^^

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          1. Ninjy on Chapter 16 Mon 02 Oct 2017 02:27AM UTC

            Ikr? V route saved my entire inner storyline for my MCs that I don't know if I'll ever straighten out enough to write about, even though they have backstories and everything xD
            "it's an AU that takes place two years prior"
            >oh thank you cheritz you saved me

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