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  1. orangeslushie on Chapter 2 Thu 12 Oct 2017 12:19AM UTC

    Internally, Carolina's probably like: WHAT THE ACTUAL F-

    Grif's ability to summon snow and survive horrendous injuries is interesting and hilarious, just as with Donut's nonchalant immortality. XD

    As for Caboose's three abilities, I agree with you on making three separate parts for each, that would be intriguing, and allow for some further explanation for each.

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    1. orphan_account on Chapter 2 Thu 12 Oct 2017 01:13AM UTC

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      I’m glad! So, I guess I’ll do tomorrow’s chapter over Caboose’s teleportation and the choose another character to write about. Don’t need a Caboose overload! : D

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