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  1. luneleine on Chapter 1 Tue 31 Oct 2017 06:34AM UTC

    ok its chapter one and im already completely sold. new fav persona 5 fic. theres SO much i love about this i dont even know where to start??? the writing is good and concise but not lacking, the dialogue is smart and the characterization. dear lord. even if the actual writing was terrible (which it's not), i'd still be reading this fic just for your akechi. you totally captured how complicated and utterly screwed up he is, without reducing him only to "villain" or making him a woobie, which is very refreshing. besides akechi, the characterization was very on point for everyone else- especially for akira and ryuji, the latter of which was particularly good. ryuji saving akechi is perfect and i love it and i love everything about this

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    1. unsungillumination on Chapter 1 Wed 01 Nov 2017 11:57AM UTC

      oh god, that's terrifyingly flattering. thank you so much - i'm honestly SO happy to hear you're enjoying it so far!

      i'm glad you like my characterisation, especially my akechi! he's a very important character to me, so i'm really pleased that people like the way i present him. i totally agree with you in that i'm tired of seeing him as simply a villain or a victim when he's so much more - both, neither, and a hundred things besides.

      thanks for reading! i hope you continue to enjoy. :)

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