This is awesome! Seriously, I'm loving this and this is just the prologue. I love the way you write and the way the story flows, so far I LOVE how you portray Marik (he's a badass, but a kind-hearted badass), I love the scene with the gods... Gosh, I love every bit of it! I'll be definitely reading the rest of this (I'm gonna have to figure out how to subscribe to a story, and I haven't done that in the one-and-a-half year I'm in AO3). Have a wonderful day! :D
P.S. Was the bit about the visible guns a reference to YGOTAS and the invisible guns? Because it sure made me laugh :D
Thank you so much!! Aah, your comment is so nice, I'm prepping for a history exam at the moment and honestly I feel so much better about life now :D I'm so glad you like it!
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