Wow, my goodness. I usually like to layout all the things that I like about a story, but this one is bound up so fluidly that I would have trouble dissecting it for you. I like the tone, it's a little bit melancholy and it's got this core of strength, just like the characters. I like your version of the story, the events, and I got chills twice, once near the beginning and once at the end.
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Desdemonaspaz (Guest) Wed 05 Sep 2012 10:15PM UTC
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