Comment on Danganronpa: Killing CRAV3

  1. mahimeghan on Chapter 1 Mon 18 Dec 2017 11:08AM UTC

    Looks promising! Ouma actually doesn’t grind my gears yet (heh)

    There’s a few grammar errors, though...

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    1. Gr_Owl on Chapter 1 Mon 18 Dec 2017 01:47PM UTC

      You're right, there were some. I re-read the chapter, I hope I spotted some. If you remember them, please let me know.
      (this is my first time writing something in English and I wanted to avoid stupid grammatical errors most of all... oops)
      I have to admit I was in a rush before and should have read it before posting. Next time I'll pay more attention. >.<

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      1. mahimeghan on Chapter 1 Mon 18 Dec 2017 02:46PM UTC

        THIS IS YOUR FIRST TIME WRTING IN ENGLISH?!

        holy shit...

        Also! Idk if you fixed it but it’s spelled reprimand, I think

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    3. Gr_Owl on Chapter 1 Mon 18 Dec 2017 04:37PM UTC

      Ok... I used the wrong words ahah sorry...
      It's my first time writing a proper story in English, I wrote other things for school but nothing as complex as a full story lol

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