Dearie me, this chapter was down right precious. I especially loved watching Captain Underpant get all googoo eyed and blushy after being kissed, and all the other fluffy moments leading up to it. The way you write it, you can definitely feel the love radiating between the two and I just adore that to pieces. Then again, I'm also a hopeless romantic.
Aw thanks. It's tricky to take a romantic moment as seriously when one of them is dressed and named the way he is, as well as make such a pairing convincing, (and this is from someone who wrote fics with more believeable pairings for the Legend of Zelda and Phantom of the Opera) but it helps when you remember how the characters act in canon. Plus these were moments of pure sweetness and affection, not a full blown romance. Though I admit I can be a hopeless romantic myself and both versions of this pairing is just cute. Letting these two finally have their moment was a blast. It was tricky to find a way to get Edith to feel affection towards CU after everything that happened, but I think I managed it. And if CU is the kind who gets excited so easily, he WOULD be the kind who'd turn into a happy, dizzy mess over a smooch.
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Rigamar00 on Chapter 19 Thu 28 Dec 2017 04:26AM UTC
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