Thank you so much! Hearing you praise the accuracy of the kid dialogue makes me really happy! I'm generally not a fan of the way children are written (especially when their dialogue is spelt how they might say it e.g. Dewek) so without that method I had to compromise a bit with how articulate they are. I'm glad you still found it believable!
Haha as soon as I started writing, I couldn't picture Laura any other way. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading ^-^
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kaistrex (weishen) on Chapter 1 Wed 07 Feb 2018 12:30PM UTC
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