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  1. Orange17 on Chapter 19 Fri 13 Apr 2018 01:07AM UTC

    Nope, no need for insecurities here. Definitely an enjoyable chapter to put it lightly. Supportive Chrissy, good big-sister Wynonna (in her own way), and Waves and Nicole in bed, I mean what more can you want?

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    1. Trash_PandaTO on Chapter 19 Fri 13 Apr 2018 01:12AM UTC

      *sigh of relief*

      Thank you! I still feel that this is so loooooong, but I'm glad it's enjoyable!

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      1. Orange17 on Chapter 19 Fri 13 Apr 2018 01:25AM UTC

        Definitely not too long. I see what you meant though, and I think it made sense to keep it all together for sure.

        P.S. the last thing I posted was 4,500+ words...soo don't want to hear it about being so loooooong :) if it works, don't fight it.

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        1. Trash_PandaTO on Chapter 19 Fri 13 Apr 2018 02:21AM UTC

          Fair enough :)

          I somehow don't feel as bad posting something longer if it's a one-shot. But a chapter...I don't know why I worry so much about that.

          I'm glad you see what I meant here with not really knowing where to break it up. It just kind of ended up being one big package.

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          1. Orange17 on Chapter 19 Fri 13 Apr 2018 02:49AM UTC

            No worries, I think it gets easy to doubt it/have second thoughts. But, for what it's worth, I think I've always looked forward to what's coming next with this.

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            1. Trash_PandaTO on Chapter 19 Fri 13 Apr 2018 03:01AM UTC

              So true! It is sooooo easy to doubt and second guess. It means a lot to hear that this is working for you! Thank you!

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              1. Orange17 on Chapter 19 Fri 13 Apr 2018 03:12AM UTC

                I might miss learning new cycling things like I did from the early chapters but the sweetness definitely makes up for it :)

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                1. Trash_PandaTO on Chapter 19 Fri 13 Apr 2018 03:14AM UTC

                  There will be more cycling fun very soon :) I have a plan....that might involve Wynonna, too!

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                  1. Orange17 on Chapter 19 Fri 13 Apr 2018 03:19AM UTC

                    Oh man, Wynonna on a different kind of bike. I can just imagine her putting a baseball card in the spokes or making motor noises as she pedals along.

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                    1. Trash_PandaTO on Chapter 19 Fri 13 Apr 2018 03:40AM UTC

                      AHAHAHA!

                      Now THAT would be very in character!

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                      1. Orange17 on Chapter 19 Fri 13 Apr 2018 03:49AM UTC

                        Lol there's also an opportunity to channel some oblivious Wynonna with her showing up in full leather riding gear and boots.

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                        1. Trash_PandaTO on Chapter 19 Fri 13 Apr 2018 03:51AM UTC

                          And a motorcycle helmet!

                          I'm also currently remembering something I saw in Oregon last year: a leather pouch that you can attach to your bike that fits a beer growler. Only, in Wynonna's case, it would fit a big bottle of whiskey

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                          1. Orange17 on Chapter 19 Fri 13 Apr 2018 02:09PM UTC

                            Hahaha oh yeah, definitely whiskey. I'm wondering if a sleeve of donuts could fit in a standard water bottle holder.

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                            1. Trash_PandaTO on Chapter 19 Sat 14 Apr 2018 04:09AM UTC

                              It does fit. I've done it :)

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                              1. Orange17 on Chapter 19 Sat 14 Apr 2018 02:12PM UTC

                                Haha the truth comes out!

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                                1. Trash_PandaTO on Chapter 19 Sat 14 Apr 2018 02:46PM UTC

                                  Ha! Yes :)

                                  Donuts, beer, burritos...all fit very perfectly into bottle cages

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                                  1. Orange17 on Chapter 19 Sat 14 Apr 2018 02:57PM UTC

                                    Cookies? Like a package of them?

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                                    1. Trash_PandaTO on Chapter 19 Sat 14 Apr 2018 02:58PM UTC

                                      That's a definite yes!

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                                      1. Orange17 on Chapter 19 Sat 14 Apr 2018 02:59PM UTC

                                        I feel like this could be a game haha

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                                        1. Trash_PandaTO on Chapter 19 Sat 14 Apr 2018 03:16PM UTC

                                          Haha! Totally! Although it might get embarrassing (for me) at some point ;) Sooooo many snacks!

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                                          1. Orange17 on Chapter 19 Sat 14 Apr 2018 04:31PM UTC

                                            Lol just start showing up to races with various snacks tucked in it and see how long it takes for people to notice.

                                            I also am thinking Wynonna might be envious of the shirts with the pocket on the back...just think of how many flasks she could store!

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                                            1. Trash_PandaTO on Chapter 19 Sat 14 Apr 2018 05:01PM UTC

                                              I once had parmesan crusted potatoes in my jersey for snacks! (That was for a "ride like they used to do in the 1960s" kind of event and apparently the Tour de France riders used to eat those...and chicken drumsticks...while riding!)

                                              Confession: I often wear a jersey that looks like a regular flannel shirt but has those back pockets. I wear it to work, to the pub etc. Pockets are awesome!

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                                              1. Orange17 on Chapter 19 Sat 14 Apr 2018 07:27PM UTC

                                                So if you put them in your jersey in tin-foil on a hot day, do they cook while you ride? Post-ride carbs!

                                                Lol to the flannel jersey. That's pretty awesome.

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                                                1. Trash_PandaTO on Chapter 19 Sat 14 Apr 2018 11:19PM UTC

                                                  They were in tin foil, but pre-cooked. Nice snack while riding, but a bit messy with the cheese. Better than sugary gels, though!

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                                                  1. Orange17 on Chapter 19 Sat 14 Apr 2018 11:23PM UTC

                                                    Lol, that's great.

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