Comment on Kira Carsen and the Hero of Tython

  1. MarkAW on Chapter 3 Fri 13 Apr 2018 01:47PM UTC

    Well written piece, I thought your characters were well realised and your description was spot on.

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    1. SWTORpadawan on Chapter 3 Fri 13 Apr 2018 05:00PM UTC

      Thank you so much!
      On a different note, do you feel my chapters are too long? I worry some readers might be discouraged.

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      1. MarkAW on Chapter 3 Fri 13 Apr 2018 07:41PM UTC

        I think that chapters should be as long as they need to be, the flow of the narritive tends to guide. Too short for the material and it’s a cliffhanger, which will annoy some folks.

        Honestly this chapter was long, but I only noticed by going back and checking. In other words it was as long as it needed to be.

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        1. SWTORpadawan on Chapter 3 Wed 18 Apr 2018 12:20PM UTC

          Thanks. I appreciate it.

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