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  1. Princeasimdiya12 on Chapter 4 Sat 28 Apr 2018 05:36AM UTC

    Ahh this was a wonderful chapter!
    For starters, I enjoyed Harold's happy/sad on and off moments at the start of the story with him feeling conflicted over his situation. It was a good balance between heartbreaking and laughable sweetness. Plus it was cool to see George be thoughtful of his predicament. And I liked the way you hinted towards his potential angst. That was good.

    And of course the scenes with Krupp were really fun to read! I especially appreciate the fourth wall joke and how you included me in the story. That was super sweet of you! Thank you! :D

    Please continue this wonderful job! :3

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    1. HolyMaiden24 on Chapter 4 Mon 30 Apr 2018 06:35AM UTC

      You're welcome. :)
      Heh, poor Harold. But luckily he got over the guilt. And yeah, we'll get to George's angst thing in chapters 7 and 8.
      As much as I have mixed feelings towards Krupp, the scenes where I can make him suffer are always delightful.
      The thing this that somehow an author cameo often occurs in my fics either directly within the story or in the author notes(usually over at fanfiction dot net, which happened in the ff dot net version of 'From fathoms below.'). This was an example of a direct "within the story" cameo but I included you too as a way to thank you and because you helped create this AU. :)
      One of the reAders is apparently going to make a comic book version of this AU. It'll be intersting to see how that will turn out.

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      1. Princeasimdiya12 on Chapter 4 Wed 02 May 2018 04:39AM UTC

        Ooo boy. I'm lowkey excited to see his angst side during those chapters. ^^;
        And I'm glad you enjoy writing out those scenes with Krupp, they can be pretty funny. And again, I'm honored that you would include me in your author cameo as a way of saying thanks. I'm still in glee over it. ^^
        And really? That sounds awesome! :D Any chance you know when they'll have that finished or started on? Because I would love to see that. :3

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        1. HolyMaiden24 on Chapter 4 Wed 02 May 2018 06:27AM UTC

          ^ _^
          Let's see... Here they go by 'Strike Class Dragon' and they go by supersromero over on tumblr. I think they want to post the comic through deviant art and they've been asking me about visual details, yet they said they will be posting when they are ready. They actually plan to include the cameo moment and they said they would be trying to look at your tumblr icon for your likeness for that scene. (I'm really curious to see how that scene will look if they get that far.)

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          1. Princeasimdiya12 on Chapter 4 Thu 03 May 2018 03:46AM UTC

            Oh cool! Thank you for that info! :)

            And that's really sweet that they'd go that far. ^_^ Though if they want a photo of me to know what I look like, they can always ask me so I can give them an update photo. I do have some selfies that I took under the tag 'selfie sunday' but those are pretty old. ^^;

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            1. HolyMaiden24 on Chapter 4 Thu 03 May 2018 05:23AM UTC

              Heh, I'm personally more ok if they use how I depict myself in the drawings I've done. Would you like me to let them know? Or are you going to contact them by replying to one of their comments? They don't have an 'ask' option up on rumblr yet.

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              1. Princeasimdiya12 on Chapter 4 Thu 03 May 2018 10:51PM UTC

                Hmm well if it's alright with you, I would like it i fyou could contact them so they can send me an ask if that's alright.

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