Thank you! I appreciate your thoughtful comments and suggestions! I think I will end it at the ‘getting together’ part because I don’t want it to be a dragged out thing where it just loses meaning. Ending it there will complete this story arc and I’m happy with that. I like the idea of sequel one shots.
I do understand why Kevin is usually portrayed that way, but at the same time he showed signs of actually being a decent kid in the show...just losing his temper a lot. I didn’t want to portray him as this one dimensional character though, and I am hoping how I’ve written him will make sense!
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devoosha on Chapter 1 Sat 05 May 2018 07:55AM UTC
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