zeFluffleTruffle (Guest)
on Chapter 2
Mon 29
Sep 201409:06PM UTC
Seems a bit like the Hunger Games, or Battle Royale, but more than a bit horrific, considering this time it involves a creepy stalker, the Doctor, and companions whom we've come to know or love. Honestly, if any of them die, I...well, I can't even imagine what I would do. However, I do have the odd inkling that someone WILL die. Oh, now I wish for once that River Song was here (Beratt's comment was funny, to say the least. Actually, I really liked River in her first two episodes, but then later writing messed up her character. The fact that she became the Doctor's "wife" really did it in for me, because sometimes I ship characters so much that I can't bear to see them with other characters. I would've liked her still if she hadn't turned into a Mary Sue. If she had been as cool as she was when she first appeared, I would've still been receptive towards her, regardless of whether or not she ended up with the Doctor). Great idea, and I know that you're a great writer, so I'll keep an eye on this.
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