THIS IS WONDERFUL I ADORE HOW YOU WROTE THIS WITH THE SWITCHING POV AND THE OMNIPRESENT VOICES ALSO, THIS IS JUST SO FUCKING CHARMING AND WARM AND /SUCH/ A FANTASTIC SET UP FOR WHATS TO COME I'M /HOOKED/ I'M READY TO FEEL THE LOVE THIS IS GOING TO BRING AND CAN I JUST SAY 'THE THINGS DEREK DOESN'T SEE' PART ARE SOOO INTRIGUING!! I'M SO FUCKING HYPED HOLY SHIT THIS IS SUCH A HAPPY STORY!!! AHHHH I CANNOT PUT INTO WORDS HOW DELIGHTED I AM RN I'M JUST BRIMMING WITH THE FEELING YOU'RE A WONDERFUL WRITER
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zombiesolace on Chapter 1 Mon 04 Jun 2018 01:26AM UTC
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