I don't usually comment on middle chapters, but I have to comment on photographer!Lance, because the way you wrote that scene with the little girl was so special and amazing, I just can't contain myself. Just thinking about it is making me tear up.
I'm trying to jump back to see the comments I may have missed in these earlier chapters (I can tell its been a while since I posted a multi-chapter fic) and this comment really made me smile (huge thanks for taking the time to leave it!) as I had in my head what I wanted the scene of photographer Lance and the little girl to look like, and I'm pleased to hear that it hopefully turned out as I had planned.
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