There's something about your writing, I makes me want to pause a lot and read even slower. (Effective commas and whatnot). The pacing is smooth, so smooth that it transitions perfectly into whatever scenes follow. The atmosphere that you give, literally lets the reader imagine what the setting should look like. The causal and clever slips of HDL in 2017 reboot and the Mickey and Friends rejoining, as well as the very clean emotions about Scrooge. I'm trying so hard not to scream as I am commenting, but wow you're blowing me away. I still adore the 'lil bits of Spanish that the triplet's are exposed too, ASDF I keep reading their dialogues in light accents. XD Kudos!
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Watson_Holmes on Chapter 7 Mon 25 Jun 2018 05:22AM UTC
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