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  1. OuMiyuki on Chapter 1 Sun 15 Jul 2018 03:55PM UTC

    I hope I don't need to know this video game much to read this? (I googled a little) Because I'm really loving the pacing and mood and setting and can't wait for the HonoUmi bits. XD

    I secretly love Lily White friendship and interactions. XD hehe.

    Umi here is so cool with how she goes through her day, I really can't wait to see how you intro the one person who can turn that smooth and relatively calm world upside down. XD

    And well... I don't think I have any pressing queries. I don't know the game, so I don't know how a Lilim would look exactly, but for now, a metallic appearance - but a warm, motherly feel because Hanayo the babysitter. :P

    P.S. Passion Project doesn't sound lame. It sounds cool! (Writing /is/ passion!)
    P.S.S. Good luck with writing! I wanna see more of this~ XD

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    1. hidekins on Chapter 1 Fri 20 Jul 2018 06:34AM UTC

      I try to give an explanation if a term comes up, so hopefully it's not too confusing.
      HonoUmi's coming very soon!

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