Oh my goodness!!! More rollercoasters of emotion just like the last chapter!
The first thing I want to say is that it's so sad to see Peter struggling with his grief. We can already see how it's affecting his behavior from not eating, not wanting to do much else, and almost breaking down when he remembers that May and Ben are dead. It's what I love about your character development! We get to see how Peter is being affected by it all and how he is going to get through it! One of the things I love as well is that Tony is trying hard to comfort and support the kid. It's the little things like just being there for him when he is crying, taking care of him on the plane, getting to know a little more about Peter's favorite things, and overall just continuing to show interest and praise! I know that they will always be there for each other, especially with how close they have become so quickly.
The next part is just it's so interesting to see all of the events in the MCU being discussed in the story and how it all effects the characters. The biggest one was seeing Tony starting to panic about Peter's safety when Hulk and the Abomination were fighting in Harlem! But he still was with Peter, so I was pretty happy he was able to stay calm to protect Peter from the danger they were all in. Soon, we will also get to see more research on the events of New Mexico (or Thor's banishment to Earth lol) and how it will all come into play in the story.
Finally, the whole Malibu scene was pretty exciting to read! You really went all out with Peter's new room! I loved all of the descriptions and I can just imagine it in my mind! It was also so cute seeing Peter take in the whole house as well as wanting to watch Tony work. I can't wait to see how they continue to develop their relationship now that they are at home! Hopefully, we will also see more interactions between JARVIS and Peter! I honestly believe Peter would make JARVIS his best friend at the house and play with him until Tony is done with work :D
Thank you for the amazing chapter! Oh my gosh, I can't express how much I love this story! I'm so excited for the next chapter! But then again, I will always be excited about every new chapter <3
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Peter will struggle from time to time with his grief, which is completely expected and normal for him. He's also going to amaze Tony with his strength, though. He’s been through so much at only seven years old, and yet he’s still just as charming and sweet as ever. Tony is going mostly on his instincts here in this chapter, and luckily those instincts seem to be spot-on with what Peter needs from him.
In the MCU canon, it’s assumed (at least I think it is) that Tony is in Malibu when the Hulk fights Abomination, and so it doesnt really affect him all that much other than perhaps piquing his curiosity. Here, since they were still in New York, and the fighting was basically down the street, his flight or fight response kicked in, and in the absence of his suit, he chose to flight. Not that his suit would’ve helped anyway, but you get what I mean.
I have no doubt that Peter and JARVIS will become fast friends :). JARVIS already seems charmed by him (but really, who wouldn’t?). I’m so glad you liked Peter’s room! I had it pictured perfectly in my head, but getting that down on paper is always a challenge.
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